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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-16 02:13 PM

When I passed by you,
I just couldn't get my eyes off yours.
My eyes wandered around in circles
Following you in the room
To where you were standing,
Or where you were dancing.
My mind was so lost
That I couldn't walk right.
I kept crashing into things
The moment you were out of sight,
Was the moment I found you again.
My heart felt the dam has broken
When I saw your eyes match mine.
I don't recall how you dance,
I was so fixed on your smile.
All I remembered was the atmosphere
Of my mind
Which was just like the air of the room
Jumping out to you.
When I next saw you,
I could hardly breath.
Every picture of you
Reminded me of that night.

Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-16 02:28 PM

Wow, Vivien, sounds like someone just stole your heart with one look. It's nice to see you again.

I enjoyed reading this.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-16 02:30 PM

Wow, this is great.

Peaches

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2001-11-16 02:56 PM

LOL, my friend asked me to describe his feeling for me. I was joking with him when I did this.

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-16 03:08 PM

Gee, this is like love at first sight!
I remember feelings like this...a while ago..well quite awhile ago...okay, it was a long time ago..but, I remember how it feels!

Good writing here Vivian,
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-11-16 03:08 PM

oh I like this very much...

I've felt this way before

great job Vivian

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-11-16 03:09 PM

I think we all have felt this way before, and you write it so well!! *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

7 posted 2001-11-16 03:14 PM

how do you make smile or funny faces in message? using HTML? is that allowed? I never used HTML here.

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2001-11-16 03:55 PM

click on the html help tag below
and you will learn everything that
you need to know!!
It's right there under quick view
I am sure that it will help you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-16-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-11-17 03:57 AM

Enjoyed reading this...James

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