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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas

0 posted 2001-11-16 01:35 PM




It seems a mistake I made this day
In a double post to have my say
I can only plead not thinking clear
For the rules have to be held dear

The moderators do their way best
When the rules are put to the test
So if my reply or post is to be read
The Corner Pub #2 is where it was fed

So take a look and you will see
For whom it was meant in all sincerity
And then you will respond, but please not to me
But to the one that it was meant to be

Bless you all and all you do
For to the Pub, I hope you will pursue
And add your words that I know you will say
And make that person have a wonderful day

Very gentle smile to you all.. /pip/Forum39/HTML/000472.html


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-16 01:41 PM



in a sharing light comes caring soul
someone's who's traveled times of old
who sees the hurt and pain in one
and brings forth the warmth of sun

to this young person I shall add my weave
to render yet some words that leave
the show of care and Spirit's comPassion
as is our way, in timely fashion...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-11-16 02:53 PM


Logan, another endearing write.  I added my comments to both posts of yours, plus to the one who inspired you to write such caring words....that way if one of your posts was removed then my comment would still stand. Guess that means I made a mistake too, eh?     
Thank you gentle man.
~hugs and a soft smile, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-11-16 03:02 PM


I also answered at the pub, and this too is truly beautiful.  You have such a generous heart.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2001-11-20 10:35 PM


Logan~
Clever .... loving and wonderful you are~
I *hug* you BIG~
~*LittleGoose*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gaia
5 posted 2001-11-20 10:43 PM


"You are the wind beneath my wings" could have been written for you, Logan.
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