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jellybeans
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0 posted 2001-11-16 09:29 AM


You know how 
after I wrote that long letter explaining 
just how I felt and how much
you have changed, 
and that a continually empty mailbox 
(on my side) and a dwindling 
amount of attention 
(on your side) lent quite a bit
of evidence towards (and believe me 
I didn't point fingers or name names, I 
simply stated the way it appears) 
the fact that someone had been 
playing and someone else had been 
played, and then you wrote back 
indignant, sincerely proclaiming 
innocence-you had no idea 
what I could possibly mean- and then, 
though I had previously ended with 
goodbye, 
I still felt the need to explain
one last time 
and tell you yes, despite all, 
I was still willing to be your 
friend, and I pressed send 
and closed down for the night....
and then sure enough, at first light,
when I find
that
there
is
not
a
single
mail (with your name on it)
and...well
lets 
just say, if I were a betting woman 
(and I could find anyone 
who would be willing to give me
odds) 
this morning I'd be rich.


© Copyright 2001 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-11-16 09:35 AM


JellyBeans~
Awwwww, I think this is a sad little write~
Not knowing, (and not needing to know) ... I send *Hugs*~
And you can take that to the bank !
*Big Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jellybeans
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2 posted 2001-11-16 09:39 AM


its ok marge...sorta sad, sorta not...lol... *I* figured out he is a player, the funny part is he still denies it to himself...oh well, he is a cutie, and its always nice to be told you are beautiful...as long as you see the zebra's stripes you can watch out for any kicks from the backend, right?
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3 posted 2001-11-16 09:53 AM


ah...the true nature revealed...and sadly, not one that meets the needs of the day..


Nice write... and as usual..I enjoyed the journey...

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-11-16 10:39 AM


This is a very sad write, dear, I'm sorry you had to go through something like this.....

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-16-2001).]

HopeS
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5 posted 2001-11-16 11:31 AM


ohh yes  , I bet quite a lot can relate to this !!! I know one or two like this guy
Hope

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