Private Dance, repost from #12

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-16 08:51 AM

Private Dance

He is waiting to read this,
she knows he is….
like a private letter, between them….
he in her world, she in his…

and he makes her want to be his private dancer…

in remote chance
remoter still the dance
but still, for the romance
she takes that stance
he'll stand the chance

and they to take the private dance
that one that won't e'er be seen
he'll call upon her in midnight dream
she'll float to him on wings unseen

to hold, then be held
in grace, be graced
she to smile
into his face
he to grasp
her warm embrace

he to take her up by small of back
and she to feel his shift and tact
his essence she breathes in
her perfume, a transient sin

her dress of roses pink in glow
in sheerest silk her skin does show
and length of limb to hip to shoulder
keeps the room from getting colder

and he in turn, in turn of crest
has worn in dream his very best
her hand lies there upon his chest
in silent beat of love's caress

in silence he reads of this, her dream
in close of eyes, then it seems
she's come to him, again, in romance
to take up this, this private dance
she'll take the stance
he'll stand the chance

for this one, most private, dance

01.27.01

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-11-16 08:57 AM

This deserves a huge ovation...

Thanks for the repost, Karilea

Regards,
Sudhir

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-11-16 08:59 AM

Ah....yes dancing in the dreams...

very nicely done...glad you reposted!!!!

Martie

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3 posted 2001-11-16 11:26 AM

Karilea--wonderful repost..so beautiful the dance!

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-16 11:30 AM

The dance,so beautiful.Great job.

Peaches

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2001-11-16 04:10 PM

Karilea - I remember this one well. It is wonderful in its reach and its pace. the message begs interpretation by every reader. Well done, Karilea. The whole point of the message is consistent throughout.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-11-16 04:35 PM

Karilea, I'm so glad you reposted this so I didn't have to miss the dance. Lovely...

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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