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rwood
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0 posted 2001-11-16 06:11 AM



Take me higher... tonight

Than ever before

Under the lights

The stars

Wherever Private Shining Moments

Will Place me

Nearest the beat of your heart



Sway with me gently

In our mix of heavenly scent

Stretch your arms around me

Hold my hand

Holding all that I am



Let me slip into your soul

As you dance me with your smile

Touching lips...meeting your stride

Strongly where you hide



Spin me round you

Collapse me so close to the floor

That you might gently fall upon  me

Dangling in your hold



Fearing nothing...in your strong arms

Saving me

Making me dizzy

In the lazy swing of your love








can yall tell I'll be missing my husband?~



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© Copyright 2001 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2001-11-16 06:33 AM


Wow Regina, this is so romantic. Beautifully done. I hope he appreciates this as much as we do.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-11-16 06:36 AM


"Making me dizzy
In the lazy swing of your love"

Such wonderful visuals Regina! You've expressed this beautifully, very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rick
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3 posted 2001-11-16 06:44 AM


Dear Regina, what a lucky man your husband is, having you awaiting his return with such thoughts. Be sure to show him this lovely etching from your heart, it has given me and I am sure many others the feeling of true love. I hope you are truly this happy in your wanting and in you life.
Loved the posting.

Sincerely
Rick

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-11-16 08:57 AM


Spin me round you

Collapse me so close to the floor

That you might gently fall upon  me

Dangling in your hold
=========================================

now how cool is that  
wonderful expressive passsionate write Regina...
some one better tell your hubby to come home with his dancing shoes on, doing his best Fred Astaire  
excellent penning poetess Ginger  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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5 posted 2001-11-16 09:57 AM


If in gentle step
to three four time
you graced my floor
would not the orchestra
miss one call for beat
as they watched?

Gentle sway of word
with touch of heart
I find again you poem
indeed

Superb



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6 posted 2001-11-16 10:09 AM


Ah, now you let a side of you show that is all woman Regina!  A side that makes us what we all are, feminine, honest, and romantic as heck!  Excellent piece.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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7 posted 2001-11-16 10:37 AM


enjoy
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8 posted 2001-11-16 11:21 AM


RWood~

'Let me slip into your soul
As you dance me with your smile '


What a scrumpdiliumpcious thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Martie
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9 posted 2001-11-16 11:23 AM


Regina--you sweep love off its feet with the slow rhythm of romance...just beautiful!
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10 posted 2001-11-16 11:23 AM


you are so sexy of a writer miss wood
peaches73533
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11 posted 2001-11-16 11:33 AM


Regina,
Such romatic writing.You have shared a beautifulpart of you heart.Hope yor husband sees this loving side of you also.Great job.
Peaches

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12 posted 2001-11-16 12:28 PM


Let me slip into your soul
As you dance me with your smile
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Regina!  Oh how I love this piece.  This is how women feel!! Now...if we can just get all the men to read it....hummm.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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13 posted 2001-11-16 02:09 PM


That's romantic=) Good Job. I like the music too.

Lizzy Vivian

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~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

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14 posted 2001-11-16 02:11 PM


I believe you handsome hubby is gonna be in some serious trouble when you get back dear somh~  This ought to just make him melt!!  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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15 posted 2001-11-16 02:16 PM


This is as beautiful as the park bench, Regina.
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16 posted 2001-11-16 02:18 PM


You are such a romantic, Regina.    Loved this!  *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

rwood
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17 posted 2001-11-16 07:57 PM


Dee: Thank you sweet Lady! I think he does  

Kit: You are so great at seeing what I mean! Hugs! Thank you dearly!

Rick: I'm leaving for 4 days. I truly am so happy with him. I could never show him enough. Thank you for your wonderful wishes! I hope so much for you too.  

Janet: LOL! Thank you so much. Don't know if we could be so agile but we try.

Cpat: I adore your poetic comment and I'm so grateful you are here!!!   Hugs!

Mysteria: I bet I could learn several pointers from you! I think you are a great "Woman" of heart and soul!  

Vandana:   Thank you!!! Hugs!

Marge: You always have the perfect words! I appreciate you so much!!

Martie: It's a joint effort! And without all of you..my words would sort of sit there motionless   Hugs!

Walt: Well thank you very much! I gotta keep the fires burning right! Hugs to you!

Peaches: Thank you!!! Oh, he will   So glad you enjoyed this piece.

Nancy: I'm so glad we connect on that! Yes..if they only knew right..but some do! Watch out!! Hugs!

Aries: Romance is in the air! I'm glad you enjoy "Woman in Me"

Donna: Yes he is!!! I hope so!!! I sure will LOL! Thank you so much~ Did I tell you how I'll miss you?~somy  

LngJhnAg: You remembered! I'm impressed! So glad you enjoyed this piece as well. Thank you very much!

Michael: I sure am...can't help myself. Thank you for being you!~Hugs!  

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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18 posted 2001-11-16 10:22 PM


Ah, Regina, you have become a "must read" for me whenever I see your name. You never disappoint.....
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19 posted 2001-11-16 10:58 PM


Regina,
I'm swooning again! I'll sit this one out as I am too weak at the knees.  

rwood
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20 posted 2001-11-16 11:39 PM


Balladeer: Then I must be doing something right! It is a thrill for even this lady to have your comments here!  

Larry: Oh...I think you could do alright!! I have absolute faith you are bonafide!

Sincerely,
Regina

Wish me well as I'll be gone for a spell.
Will be back with my poetry packed!  

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Larry C
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21 posted 2001-11-19 01:38 AM


Regina,
Okay, so I was practicing while you were gone and think I'm up to this. I'll take the next dance, okay? There is a first for everything.

Larry C
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22 posted 2001-11-19 01:38 AM


Regina,
Okay, so I was practicing while you were gone and think I'm up to this. I'll take the next dance, okay? There is a first for everything.

Larry C
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23 posted 2001-11-19 01:38 AM


Regina,
Okay, so I was practicing while you were gone and think I'm up to this. I'll take the next dance, okay? There is a first for everything.

Larry C
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24 posted 2001-11-19 01:39 AM


Regina,
Okay, so I was practicing while you were gone and think I'm up to this. I'll take the next dance, okay? There is a first for everything.


Make that four dances!!!! This thing gets stuck...well poop!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-19-2001).]

Domzi
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25 posted 2001-11-19 03:28 PM


Your poem was beautifully well said!
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26 posted 2001-11-19 03:44 PM


LOL...I just came back to say it looks like the needle got stuck on Larry's old record player! Old gramps is just goin' to fall over from dancin' sooo much!
Hugs, Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

JamesMichael
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27 posted 2001-11-19 03:51 PM


Enjoyed the romantic formula...James
MyEnchanted_Melody
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28 posted 2001-11-19 05:24 PM




Wow.....this is so breathtakingly romantic.

beautiful Regina....just beautiful.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



Startime
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29 posted 2001-11-19 05:29 PM


*sigh* such a perfect combination of words and music. One cannot help but want to dance. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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30 posted 2001-11-19 07:58 PM


Regina
What a stunning piece of writing from the Queen of Romance......I loved each and every word.  Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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31 posted 2001-11-19 09:05 PM


Regina,
I'm glad you had the weekend off. I rested up and I'm ready now.  

SmartChick
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32 posted 2001-11-19 10:08 PM


I enjoyed reading this. You are so romantic.
Suetang
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33 posted 2001-11-20 02:47 PM


Regina
This was stunning.  Such wonderful words from the Queen of Romance.  Take care...Sue

Suetang

rwood
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34 posted 2001-11-22 08:53 AM


Larry: I knew you'd wait till I was all worn out and ready to fall over! But it would still be ~Scandalous!!! Let's give 'em somethin' to talk about!!! LOL!!! Thanks for being patient and the welcome home. Hugs!

Domzi: Thank you very much! Appreciate your visit!

Nancy: LOL! I love your little dancing man! Larry was practicing! LOL.

James: Thank you so much. Yours are quite potent too!!!  

MEM: So grateful you think so. I have to pour out every once in a while! Hugs!

Karen: I have to keep up with you...as you light beautiful flames my Lady! Hugs!

Sue: Oh you are so kind to me!!! But I know who wears that crown! You! The Poetic Princess of Passion! Hugs!

Smartchick: You are so sweet! We all have that side to us. Just takes the right combination of excitement and yearning for that special touch! Hugs!

Thanks for still being here everyone! I missed you all!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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