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DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

0 posted 2001-11-16 12:54 PM

Images of you float through the mind

Memories of times shared, painful to me
Intermost thoughts never allowed to be shared
Swallowing tears as e mails are read
Sailing away night after night

Yacking on the phone for hours
On a warm summer night in July
U and I met in person, all my dreams came true.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-11-16 07:19 AM

It's amazing how close we can become through e-mails and telephones. Amazing that some have the opportunity to meet Dawn ... you've expressed your tender heart very well.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-11-16 06:33 PM

Oh gosh.......so lucky to have met in person and fulfilled your dreams. Absolutely wonderfully expressed poem. I love it. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2001-11-16 06:43 PM

lovely expressed=)

Two is a beautiful numbers.
It takes two birds to have harmony,
Two eyes for prefect eyesight,
Two lines to be parellel,
Two socks to be a pair;
It takes two to be friends.
I've a little trouble with math.
I only count in multiiply of two.
For that matter,
Nobody ever have left out=)

Lizzy

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

4 posted 2001-11-25 07:45 AM

Hey Dawn!
This poem is very sweet and nice!Glad it all worked out for you!

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

5 posted 2001-11-26 12:36 PM

absolutely beautiful

Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

6 posted 2001-11-26 03:11 PM

Love your poem, sounds like it really hurts you to know this person is so distant from you now. Maybe someday in the future he'll be back or someone new and special will fill the emptiness you feel inside.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-11-26 03:17 PM

Dawn, I hope your dream come true is still part of your reality.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-11-26 05:05 PM

enjoyed

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-11-26 07:40 PM

Dawn
Such lovely words of love and longing.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

10 posted 2001-11-27 11:38 AM

Thank you one and all for the replies. Unfortunately this person that I write of is very far away both physically and emotionally from me right now. I had just received an e mail from him after not hearing from him at all in three weeks and was missing him so very much. I guess in a lot of ways I didn't express my true feelings very well in this poem, but that's ok. It still turned out to be an awesome poem. But I've noticed that you all are writing personal ads over in the lounge. Write away cause I sure do need one. LOL.

Dawn

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