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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-16 12:38 PM



Practice Your Lines

next time you say
you love me
practice your lines

for the truth
shines through words
with warning signs

words can be pretty
and our motives
can be driven

love is not about
if or because
it’s freely given

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-11-16 12:44 PM


and always there's the spark of hope
that he meant the words he spoke...
but truth is truth and fact is fact--
the puzzle piece must fit exact.

smile...inspired me lady slick..
enjoyed much.

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-11-16 12:07 PM


And practice too
your ear to hear
deftly through
the mask of deception

Once again, you go staight to the heart of the matter.

And you continue to spark ideas in my head . . .

Thank you,
e

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2001-11-16 12:12 PM


well said...

enjoyed this one...

regards,
sudhir

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