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Dee
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0 posted 11-15-2001 10:55 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dee


I donít think you really know
the feelings you can create
when your words flow over me
opening emotions gate.
Touching me with your sweetness,
reaching deep into my soul,
love overflows from my heart,
rushing like a waterfall.
All I see through the mist
is the welcome in your eyes.
All I hear above the roar
are the sweet words your heart cries.
Look through my eyes, my sweet one,
I am sure you too will see
a gentle and tender soul
and the love he has for me.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

© Copyright 2001 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-15-2001 11:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You touch the heartstrings softly with this one, Dee  
Sven
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2 posted 11-15-2001 11:06 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

ahhhhh. . . refreshing. . .

let it flow Dee. . . wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
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3 posted 11-15-2001 11:46 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Dee
This was stunning and so very beautiful.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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4 posted 11-16-2001 12:01 AM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

'I donít think you really know
the feelings you can create
when your words flow over me
opening emotions gate'

I love this...stunning is a great word to describe it...a keeper in my eyes, for sure...excellent write!

sp     

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Dee
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5 posted 11-16-2001 12:49 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

'Deer, thank you. I am pleased it had that effect  

Sven, it seems to be flowing all by itself  

Sue, thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.

snowpants, it is an honour that you feel this is a keeper. Thank you.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

Janet Marie
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6 posted 11-16-2001 08:05 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is so lovely Dee...
wonderful use of imagery and metaphor of the waterfall to enhance the express of the emotions. All wrapped up in rhyme and sweet sincerety.
A lovely inspire and intend.
well done poetess girlie, so good to see your work again  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


7 posted 11-16-2001 08:34 AM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

This is a lovesly poem. Thank you for posting it.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 11-16-2001 08:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dee~
This beauty was a treat to find in my mailbox this morning~
Stunningly lovely ....
Thank you for being a wonderful poet and friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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enjoy
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10 posted 11-16-2001 11:32 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Dee,

This is beautifully written, tender, truly one of your best.  Such nice work here, my friend. (((hugs)))  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.††

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 11-16-2001 12:01 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Dee, this is wonderful work...

regards,
sudhir
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with you


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Dee, this is so beautiful  
Parker
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Dee, this is a wonderful sweet and loving piece, from a sweet and lovely poet.  

Thank you for your friendship.  

Parker
VAS
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14 posted 11-16-2001 01:11 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

very very fine piece

loving sentiments vividly stated!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Dee
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15 posted 11-16-2001 02:23 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Janet, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me.  

SmartChick, glad you enjoyed.

Marge, and thank you for what you do for me   Glad you liked.

Vandana, thank you for reading and replying.

Michael, it is amazing what one can write when they are inspired.

Sudhir, you are another who's comments mean much   Thank you sir.

Sea, I am pleased you, who writes romance so well, liked my words. Thanks  

Parker, another who's romantic words impress me. From one friend to another, you are welcome.  

VAS, wow, thank you for the 'very, very'.

With the love and support I recieve here you all make it so much easier for me to write. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, guys.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


16 posted 11-17-2001 12:20 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Wow! A vivid mixture of emotion I see in this. And yes I agree, amongst your best, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Dee
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17 posted 11-17-2001 02:36 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Eddie, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.†††† a brand

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


18 posted 07-17-2002 09:13 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Just wanted you to know that this is one of my favorites of yours and I think a major turning point in your poetry.  The cadence was supreme, the imagery kissed the emotions delicately, and it reads like a song out loud or silently either one.  Beautiful is this piece and mesmerizing is the draw lingereing in your eyes.  Library for sure and put on a special shelf reserved only for you.

Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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oops, twice in two days......("click") see how mesmerized we get?
Dee
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20 posted 07-18-2002 10:27 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Mark, you are good for my ego you know. I consider myself an average poet but you make me feel like a master.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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