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Strings Of My Heart
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Strings Of My Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Strings Of My Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~  I walk toward you in purposeful stride gathered in the gifting of your love Knowing full-well you compose the songs my heart needs so tenderly to hear I need no juke-of-box playing the classics of yesteryear for only in sharing today's heartstrings can we blend the music of our sweet tomorrows So, meet me in the sound booth where soft tender moments will be strummed I'll sit content while you play our future on the strings of my heart You play me so expertly I can hardly tell~ where the composing ends and the rapture begins~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH MARGE!! The last two added lines just blew me away! BEAUTIFUL! Also...love the word..juke-of-box!  Enjoyed, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Those last two lines bring out the perfect tones of this beautiful poem. I love it.  may he play the strings of your heart forever more. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Beautifully musical and romantic! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Awwww Marge this is so beautiful. You write love so well. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I'll sit content while you play our future on the strings of my heart" This is so beautifully creative Marge. You've captured such lovely sentiments within, and the flow was superb ... it glided through my mind. Much enjoyed my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. I love it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is abundantly wonderful, my friend, Marge... strings of the heart, indeed... Regards, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ It's such fun to see your replies~ Thank you very much~ StarTime~ Thank you bunches and bunches~ BettyLou~ Glad to know you enjoyed it~ Dee~ Ahhhhhh, my dear ... love writes ME~ Thank you with *hugs* Kit~ Thanks, hon. Got some awesome inspiration~  SmartChick~ Thank you, sweetie~ Sudhir~ So glad to know you enjoyed it, sweet friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Hmmmmm...well, I sure THOUGHT I had replied to this one...silly me.  Oh well...that just means that I can send it back up for another round now. Ya know I love this little song from your heart strings.  Love you bunches,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Marge, "Where soft tender moments will be strummed"............ What a wonderful sounding place . . . A very romantic thought. JoMason |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a lovely write, so filled with hope and happiness... beautiful! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Marge, you serenade these blue pages always with your romantic melodies! (sigh) May the lyre of your heart forever play the verse of eternal true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so very much, sweet friend, this is a timeless hit! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this strings my heart.....soooooooo beautiful penned and I must agree with some poets above .....the last two added lines are splendid ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, I utterly utterly love this. Margie girl you suit love so well, I adore seeing you arrayed in your prettiest hues. It truly inspires you  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Marge, The ending made the poem. Very nice feeling in this one. Nan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ My bestest little buddy ... You know the 'everyday' of my heart~ Thank you ALWAYS for being there for me~ I love you~ JoMason~ Thanks so much ... and welcome to Passions~ SuthernGal~ You delight me with your sweet friendship~ Thank you always~ (((Hugs))) Noah~ Thanks~ Charisma~ Awwww, thank you sweetie~ VanDana~ Thanks~ MarshaLove~ I do appreciate you~ Pilgrimage~ Thanks so much ... and welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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