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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-15 07:48 PM



Commentary

comics cluing in
more than editors can say
something is brewing

red white blue giving
trying to heal living pain
where did it all go

security sold
dead numbers are more than gold
social, this is not

some prefer the light
others need more than help to
uncover dark deeds

before one gives more
find out who the giving’s for
don’t feed greedy need

enough news today
you are old enough to read
tell me when you’re through



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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1 posted 2001-11-15 08:14 PM


You've said it all.Good job.
Peaches

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-11-15 08:49 PM


Sure does seem like it's always bad news.
But maybe Harry Potter will make everyone smile..(taking the little ones this weekend)
Sandra

Nan
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3 posted 2001-11-15 08:52 PM


Indeed... How many ways can they say the same thing??

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