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Open Poetry #17

Many Lessons You Need to Learn

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

0 posted 2001-11-15 07:00 PM

There are many things you need to learn about true love
That is when it is sent to you, don't look the other way, because in its place pain will stay
I cannot believe that you judge based on looks, I didn't expect that from you, I thought that you could be to good to be true
Just because I don't look like Brittney Spears you put up this wall of fears
I've only known you a short time and you've already made me cry
I throw my hands in the air and wonder why, you say you have fallen for my personality
I've already fallen for you, perhaps this is a mistake but in my heart I know that you are wrong
I love it when you sing to me, Valetine, one of my favorite songs.
Sweetie, you have no idea how much you really mean to me
Perhaps one day when i am gone and moved on, then you will open your eyes and see.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-15 09:22 PM

How very sad. My heart goes out to you. I pray love will fill your life and bring joy to your heart.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-15 10:47 PM

perhaps you're right Laura. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2001-11-15 10:54 PM

Who would want Brittney anyway?!

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-16 04:08 AM

Hope the eyes open before its too late...James

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

5 posted 2001-11-16 10:45 AM

star,

Yes it is very sad.  I thought I really had love....I got my hopes up to high.....oh well

John,

Yes i think i am right. :-)

Larry,

I know one person who would want her....unfortunately, i've fallen for that person......I know i should have guarded myself but i let her have my heart.

James,

I too hope her eyes open......I want to give her the world.

***********you guys are all so sweet!  i cried when i read these.***********

Thanks for reading,

~Laura~

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