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emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

0 posted 2001-11-15 05:12 PM

Yes, there is an urgency in
wanting you, needing you,
there is a forever place between
the blending of our souls,
there is a time for lovers, a time
for complete and utter abandon...

I want to lay my head upon your bare
chest and whimper beneath your
breath. I want to draw circles
of delight and dip my whisper
deep into your own...We will meet
in that magical
sphere where fantasy meets reality
there will be no
redeeming of time while we are together.

None.

For when you make me yours and when
I release myself completely to you,
let me tell you what is in my heart
this eve . Just close your eyes and
let me tell you...

No stars that ever shone, no sun
that ever breathed upon the bay
and no moon that ever hung has
viewed a love such as ours.

None.

No arms that ever cried outstretched
could ever hold this fire,
no heart whose beating rhythm
fought back death could
ever match my cadence, and no
words that ever penned to parchment
could ever give testimony to
the passion that is in my being for
you, my love.

None.

For you have made me wanton,
you have found a barren place
and you and only you can quench the
particles that are yet to explode,
and now, my love,
that I have told you what is in
my heart....now that I have emptied
this vessel of all emotion
without restraint and now that
I have denied nothing for there
is no emotion I have not yet
revealed to you...

None.

Now, my love,

let me show you....

[This message has been edited by emily (edited 11-15-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-15 05:31 PM

Filled with the sensual beauty of true love. This is absolutely beautiful. I love it. Very well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2001-11-15 10:20 PM

emily,
Wow! Well...you took my breath away!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2001-11-15 10:36 PM

WOOHOO! This must be written to one of the luckiest guys alive!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-15 10:46 PM

this just flows with passion and urgency. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

5 posted 2001-11-16 12:38 PM

thanks all...yep, he's my "dream lover"
where are you? with a love oh so true....
sigh.....

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