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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-15 01:21 PM


Loneliness....a living hell
Hearts haunted by nothings
Not forgotten but unspoken
So many living this

Left to remember memories
Never coming true again
Factual reality for some
Here the sadness lies

The happy so nonchalant
Many clueless to depression
Dancing to own song
Unaware cliff so close

Then appear mortal angels
Once fallen yet alive
Precipice survived for reason
Grasping hand pulling up

Saving you from hell
Place many haven't been
Lost in sheltered ignorance
Concerned with sole preservation

All one friend away
From isolated drifting pedestals
Can't get down alone
Need to wake compassion

Embrace your better halves
They've known the fires
You have never suffered
Learning much from them

When crying to you
Wisdom is honestly offered
What one's never known
Will be greatest teacher


© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-15 01:42 PM


Hey Rob,

You have described lonliness to a T
I hope you aren't lonely because I know how terrible it feels to be lonely.
Just know that you have a friend in me if you ever need one!

Love,
RP

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-15 04:58 PM


Now this is a feeling I know plenty about. You are correct, Sir Robert, loneliness is a living hell but what is one to do. Oh well, such is life. Very well put. I pray you are not lonely my friend.  *hugs*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-11-15 05:54 PM


This is remarkably stunning. What a write of sadness and reality  

Kathleen
(Kay)

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-15 07:18 PM


EXCELLENT SIR ROBERT!  ENJOYED!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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5 posted 2001-11-15 08:51 PM


you have said it all too well.Hopefully this is not you.
Peaches

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