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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-15 12:30 PM


Like sea sick sailors
Rowing from sunken hell
Back to forgotten lands
Legs unready for earth

So go tiny minds
Lost in central thought
Unaware of truth's reality
Making love to mirror



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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-11-15 12:46 PM


Robert,
my but I really really like this one!!!!!!!!
Especially .."making love to mirrors"!!!!
Great job here!  (glad you've joined Passions)

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-11-15 12:48 PM


Robert, you do pessimism well.  I'll bet you could say the same thing optomistically equally as well.

Much truth in your words

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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