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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-15 10:19 AM


disillusionment
I fight you every day
Calmly and with grace
~*~

Inspired by:  Just a Poem, No More, No less




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-15 10:20 AM



Yes.

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2 posted 2001-11-15 11:30 AM


Link doesn't seem to be working but I believe I remember the essence of the poem and you did it's inspiration justice.  
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3 posted 2001-11-15 11:42 AM


I have corrected the link.  Sorry for the error

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-11-15 12:05 PM




(smiles) Your loving heart is never disillusioned, for you always shine with grace and inspiration from your loving heart, (sigh) May the wings of grace forever flutter happily with you! (big hugggssssss) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-15 12:33 PM


It's a quiet fight. Disappointment's grumbling is a deep and open sea battle fathoms from sight like two warring lobsters, whose life and death struggle goes unnoticed by a calm surface of grace. Interesting.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

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