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Open Poetry #17

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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-11-15 10:11 AM

Eggshell external
Golden lies within its whole
Too soon both may break

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-11-15 10:17 AM

wonderful poems
like these start the day so well
brings smiles to the face

regards,
~sudhir~

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-15-2001).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-11-15 10:18 AM

Deca--sooner or later, fragile does break, or get hard boiled. Alot was said in those three lines.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-11-15 12:52 PM

yes, there is much more to this verse than meets the eye on first read....food for thought! Enjoyed feeding my head!

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-11-15 12:54 PM

they break not lady
as long as I draw a breath
I guard against that

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-11-15 02:45 PM

Enjoyed feasting on your thoughts Deca.
Definately food for thought....or lunch...*w*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-11-16 10:53 AM

enjoy

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