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plug452
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since 2000-05-22
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natchitoches, louisiana. U.S.A

0 posted 2001-11-15 01:31 AM



A truth

The joys
Of life
Are only seen
Through distant
Eyes
Happiness
Is known
From pain
Sorrow makes
The light shine
Bright
The night
Reveals
The day

© Copyright 2001 luke campbell - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-11-15 10:14 AM



No ying without the yang.

Enjoyed!

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-11-15 12:43 PM


every phrase was packed with truth, and opened the mind to reality!  Great write here!  And we haven't met, but I like your style and welcome to Passions!!!  

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    


Temptress
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3 posted 2001-12-03 08:10 PM


Simply put, but well done! enjoyed.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2001-12-03 08:17 PM


Well said. A powerfully bright flashlight is more visible in the dark than outside on a bright sunny day.
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2001-12-03 08:46 PM


This is very nice. Welcome to passions.
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-12-03 09:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Luke, this is so very true, for I believe we learn better to love after first feeling the sorrow so we can share compassion with others and heal their pain! (sigh) Sooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend! Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by us all here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful verse! You have such a  beautiful heart, sweet Luke, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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