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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-15 12:39 PM


Heard her radio song
Sweet voice calling me
From pedestal so high
Might never come down

Still remembering past joy
When love was new
Innocence still on lips
Trapped now in glory

Face in electric windows
Looking back at me
Once there each morning
Cheek on my chest

Singing passion in ear
My body her instrument
Played it so well
We became as one



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-15 01:30 AM


Sir Robert,
Really like the ending.  

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2 posted 2001-11-15 08:34 AM


"Singing passion in ear
My body her instrument
Played it so well
We became as one"

I really like this part...  

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-11-15 08:37 AM


Robert,
Enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 2001-11-15 08:41 AM




(sigh) Oh Robert, you are always soooooooo romantic, her radio song will always play in your heart just as you will make love again swoon with your pure and faithful song of the beat of your golden heart. (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, you are a true romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-15 08:57 AM


Singing passion in ear
My body her instrument
Played it so well
We became as one

Oh Yes!  Love this one...sure do!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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