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Open Poetry #17

Dad, Miss You

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-11-14 11:07 PM

My wife would scream and then she’d cry
The twisting roads went speeding by
It had been months, I’d break a bit
To see the cliff where trees lay split

If we were blessed and we’re unharmed
Then still I drive my wife alarmed
A babe in back as wheels go down
The steepest cliff the angels found

As I will muse a curve we pass
A wreath on stand, depress the gas
I read the words of lesson’s true
In a child’s hand writ “Dad, miss you”

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

1 posted 2001-11-14 11:11 PM

I guess you answered your ? of what shall I do, the date is near. You wrote a poem for all to cheer. it was done well and I'm glad I understand it. good job and I will say a prayer for all involved.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-14 11:15 PM

Walt a very poignant write, and I too shall say a prayer for all concerned. There is a lesson in this that I hope all will understand. Thank you.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2001-11-15 01:16 AM

Walt,
Eventually we all do. Excellent write.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-15-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-11-15 09:58 AM

Thank you for this. A WoW will suffice...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-15-2001).]

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

5 posted 2001-11-16 08:47 AM

Wow, I'm in this poem.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2001-11-16 11:45 AM

Wow.My prayers are with all concerned.
Peaches

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2001-11-16 12:37 PM

I feel I should understand this but I don't so please someone help me. It sounds scary

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