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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-11-14 11:04 PM


The Night

From her heavenly perch
she touches me
Grasping,enticing
she desires to hold me

She serenades me
filling my soul
with dreams and visions
of love, romance and the like

Dressed in diamonds and velvet
black as the night without her
as fiery silk trims
the edge of her evening gown

She is something to behold
a spectacle of life
less seen by those
who live by another light

And though she leaves me
I do not worry
because at the end of everyday
I find her serenading me once more



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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-14 11:06 PM


*sigh* I am very much in the mood for romance so this lovely poem fits me perfectly, Craig. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-14 11:18 PM


oh what the night can do....tender, romance....lovely...


Greeneyes~

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rosepetals25
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3 posted 2001-11-14 11:20 PM


ctowen,

    Awwww I like this one   Romance gets me every time.  Well done  

Hugs,
Tara

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     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2001-11-14 11:26 PM


Oh how I wish I had someone to serenade me!
Very good write!

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5 posted 2001-11-15 09:48 AM


Another romantic and beautiful piece from you. Much enjoyed
Sandra

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