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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-11-14 07:21 PM


In a parallel universe
in another place and time
when he was mine
grass was a brilliant green
the wine glass overflowed
and roses smelled of love
instead of death
But that was there,and this is here
and I have only this time
to live in
somehow.



© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-11-14 07:28 PM


and live you will. . . for we must exist in the time that we're in. . . not in the time that we were. . .

excellent Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-11-14 07:36 PM


Great truth in letting the past go and allowing the present to be with you...
that you might see the future ahead of you
and not look back....

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-11-14 07:38 PM


yes, this is strong, this is good...Sandra, real good  

Kathleen
(Kay)

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2001-11-14 10:21 PM


In another time ...

The grass another shade of green,
your looking glass half full,
roses sent unseen,
a time compatible.

That was then,
it is now,
life to live
somehow.

The past must be passed
for the future to begin.
      <<< *s* >>>  
        


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-14 10:31 PM


And live you will Sandra!
...may you walk with a song in your heart and a smile on your face!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-11-14 10:42 PM




(sigh) Oh Sandra, you will, for your lovely heart is destined to fly into this special world again and embrace true love eternally! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words always touch my heart deeply! (smiles) Love shall flitter its wings in your heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-14 11:24 PM


Walk into the brilliance of your future and let the sparkle back into your eyes. A new time awaits you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Jeremiah Johnson
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8 posted 2001-11-15 01:25 PM


a great poem well expressed. if you ever need anyone to talk to or anything at all i'm here email me heck i'll even give you my number. hope all things work out and i'm here for you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Sunnyone
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9 posted 2001-11-15 05:40 PM


and, lil sis, you will find that when you close that door to the past, a new future awaits you.......look for an email tomorrow!!

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    


rwood
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10 posted 2001-11-16 07:16 PM


The grass is still green...well somewhat faded from season..the glass is still there...(They) are at a loss for not being there with you. And you...you are still a wonderful Lady!!! Very worthy of a grand toast! I think I will   To Sandra..a Lady of heart and poetry and gifts just waiting to be opened!

Sincerely,
Regina

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-11-16 10:07 PM


Perhaps in another time on another plane, he will be yours again.  Intriguing thoughts, Sandra.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-11-17 03:52 AM


Wonderful writing...James
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
13 posted 2001-11-17 08:20 AM




In a parallel universe
in another place and time
when he was mine
------------

Wonderful Sandra....& soooo heart touching.

Thank you

Take care dear friend...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
14 posted 2001-11-17 11:40 AM


A toast, indeed, for a very special lady!  And a map to explore those other dimensions...  (let me know when you find a portal).  There are many more adventures ahead...

-MVS

"If you don't ask:  you don't get." -Steve Miller

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Kit McCallum
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15 posted 2001-11-17 12:40 PM


You've captured the depth and dimension of this ponder beautifully Sandra. much enjoyed your expression in this piece ... big hugs.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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