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Balladeer
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0 posted 2001-11-14 07:20 PM




Poor Lucie had a real hard time..
Though she was struck by Cupid
The guy she fell in love with
Thought that she was really stupid!

So she decided she would show
Him she was really smart.
She got the encyclopedia
And learned it all by heart!

One evening she smiled wide and said,
While they were on a date,
"I can name the capital
Of every U.S. state!"

He looked at her quite dubious...
She saw it in his eye
And said, "C'mon, just ask me one
And let me give a try."

"OK", he grinned. Let's see how good
You can remember them.
The capitol of Montana....?"
She smiled and screamed out "M!!!"  

© Copyright 2001 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-11-14 07:29 PM


ROFL   *wiping tears*
Larry C
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2 posted 2001-11-14 07:47 PM


Balladeer,
Well...look who joined in! And such a fine job. Balladeer ... 1 Lucie ... ?  

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3 posted 2001-11-14 07:54 PM


Oh my!!! LOL VERY cute sir!!! LOL
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-11-14 08:11 PM


Sweet Deer, I just needed that smile before I go to bed. Bed???? Yes it's 2.00 AM overhere.

Simply love those smiling verses of you  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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5 posted 2001-11-14 08:15 PM


ROFLand then some....When I stop...Oh man.
this is great....by chance...what is the
hair color?

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6 posted 2001-11-14 09:43 PM


Balladeer~
Just tooooooooo cute~
Can't wait to see what she strangles you with~
You were a very good poet~

What a twist ... you rocked, poet~
Love n' *Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-11-14 09:46 PM


LOL .... wonderful punch line Michael, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2001-11-14 09:53 PM


Denise...hehe..thanks for the tears  

Larry C...she started it!!! I'm a victim!!

deVine One...I thank you  

Titia...sleep with a smile, sweet lady  

Marge...I WAS a very good poet? I ROCKED? Did I die while I wasn't looking??????

Kit...thant's why they call it a PUNCH line! Thank you, my friend  

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9 posted 2001-11-14 10:36 PM


You got the whole wit in your head
you got a hole wide in your head
you got the whole wit in your head

Lucie
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10 posted 2001-11-14 10:48 PM


Thats exactly it my friend
the pokin I been missin.
I was trying to pull 'em in
I thought no one would listen.

I love it keep 'em coming
this is so much fun, they'll see.
The friendly banter back and forth
disguised as poetry.

I have to give you credit friend
your the best! But you know what?
I'm bowin down to you my 'Deer,
(so you can kiss my butt!) giggle.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


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11 posted 2001-11-15 07:27 AM


~Laughing wildly~ What a come back kid!!! Love this guys!

Sincerely,
Regina

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Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Balladeer
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12 posted 2001-11-15 10:25 AM


lucie, that's quite a rebuttal! I'll see what I can do  
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13 posted 2001-11-15 11:45 AM


Balladeer scores!  Lucie attempts to show her best side.
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14 posted 2001-11-15 11:46 AM


Ha, ha! Name the capitol, one of my son's favorite jokes!

Corinne

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15 posted 2001-11-15 12:07 PM


Hmmmm... this smacks of something familiar... fruity, yet with a hint of vegetables.  Hmmmm... produce seems to be in the air and something has gone rotten in Denmark!  
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16 posted 2001-11-15 12:13 PM


LOL at this one. I never saw it coming, but  should have with your pen name on it.
GREAT FUN!

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Deep in the heart
17 posted 2001-11-15 12:42 PM


I would love to referee this match
observe up close the plots you hatch
Shakespear will twirl in his grave
laughing at you two so very brave
re-butt-al-ists

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