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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-14 04:55 PM


I am
compassionate, needful,
giving,
sharing, supporting,
and
romantic.
Romance pours from my pores.
Passion and compassion
are two sides
of the same coin
that is me.
I need to be needed
and desire to give
to a like desire.
I'd love to share
and be supported
as I support
love
and devotion.

If you feel
I am travelling
the same path
as your desire,
let's meet, and talk,
and share our lives,
our love,
eternity.
~*~
Inspired by:   Apply within – the interview (Interloper’s Challenge))


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-11-14 04:58 PM



A wonderful response to a challenge...well met!

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-11-14 10:55 PM


I haven't read the challenge yet,but that was one heck of a personal ad  
Sandra

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-14 11:27 PM


*giggling* if you weren't taken this star would be looking pretty closely at what you offer. **hugs** great writing as always.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Gaia
4 posted 2001-11-14 11:44 PM


BRAVO!!!


Dor's poetry always intrigues
and makes us ask a question.
Interloper's poetry always
steals our hearts
and sends us
to confession.
But I confess
I never confess!

doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-11-15 06:46 PM


WOW!!!!!! hehe  

I wondered when some special man
would fill the application
with words so sweet, that the complete
of me would feel elation!

I waited and I watched my verse
get answered by the ladies!!
I couldn't figure THAT one out!
(I don't even drive a mercedes!) .... lol

And then one gentleman came in
and told me 'bout his kissing
as if a kiss of total bliss
from heaven i was missing!

Oh, kisses are luxurious!
They're wonderful! Essential!
But certainly they're not the ONLY
needed fine credential!  

But YOU've filled out required fields!
A first class application!
Perhaps my ad won't have to air
upon the TV station!

(I was afraid, I must admit
to film my ad and show it,
since once the single men saw me
they'd ALL love me, I know it!  

It's not that I don't want attention
but imagine all the pleading!!!!
I certainly don't need a harem!
One man's all i'm needing! )


But anyway, let's get back to
the app which you've presented.
It's BEAUTIFUL, delightful, sir!
(Hope none of it's invented).

So, maybe we can talk some more
and dream about forever!
Each day connects each day to next!
And True Love can't be severed!

Perhaps our paths will one day cross
and both will find elation!
And then, Romantic One.... a stamp
"APPROVED" on application!!!!


hehe....

THANK you, RomanticOne.... you are a very sweet man and your poem was absolutely lovely!!!!!!!    

walker
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6 posted 2001-11-15 07:30 PM


Interloper one thing that can be proven it's that you are a true romantic. The rest I don't know   Great poem, I loved it.
Interloper
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7 posted 2001-11-15 07:44 PM


In all modesty I must admit EVERY word I penned is the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth.  I am a hopeless romantic who cannot resist a challenge.

Would you call that a competitive romantic?
                                          


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2001).]

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