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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-14 04:42 PM


Two leaves drifting apart
Fluttering from life's tree
Blown apart so soon
Never again to meet



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1 posted 2001-11-14 04:44 PM



How alike life to a leaf then...

well done, Sir...

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2 posted 2001-11-14 04:45 PM


I love these Sir Robert.  This one is quite sad though...almost like two ships passing in the night.
Very very well done sire.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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3 posted 2001-11-14 10:58 PM


**hugs**Sir Robert. Sadness fills this poem. I hope a hug from me will help a little. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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