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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-14 01:35 PM






You Are Why
By: Noah Eaton
8/4/01

You are why doves cry
Innocent prayers flood your eyes
Melting the hearts of many
Spellbinding all with your beauty

You are why roses bloom
Whispers of your heart make them swoon
Attracting all that’s earthly and pure
Your red lips breathe loves cure

You are why angels sing
Cherubs leap to your harmony
Casting rainbows in this boys dream
To embrace your fantasies

You are why stars shine
As do many other goddesses so divine
You are what makes my heart beat with pride
So take my hand and take me to the greatest heights

You are why I am singing this love song
You are what makes my dreams so fond
You are why I fell in love
You are why…my love

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-14 01:42 PM


Yes, she is, Noah, and someday you will hold her in your arms and sing these words to her softly. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-14 02:21 PM


Hi hun...

You are the king of romance! My king! : )
Beautifully done Noah

hugs and kisses
RP

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3 posted 2001-11-14 02:24 PM


Beautiful words of love sweetie.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2001-11-15 01:04 PM


this one had to be for a very special person, and it is beautiful, just beautiful!

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-11-15 02:09 PM


Very nice Noah...James
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6 posted 2001-11-15 02:10 PM


soft and romantic
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