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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-14 12:11 PM

Breathing Lessons

should my blood
jell in my veins
because you
no longer remain
it seems
to continue
to flow
and my heart
still pumps
and goes
plenty of air
left for me
to breathe
taught from
your absence
without leave
things now
are so
painfully clear
I only
missed you
when you were
suppose to be here

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-14 12:25 PM

Breathe in, breathe out.
Life's blood still flows
after the sadness blows
away on the next wind.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-11-14 12:31 PM

Jello blood quivering
Chilled by your breathless sigh
Shook to a shivering
Stilled when you walk on by.

Where breath
Where beating heart continues
There words
Your writing show venues

With eye closed,
My mind flashes to visions
You exposed
By your words well written.

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-11-14 12:34 PM

winds blow in to take sadness away
tomorrow brings light of a brand new day!!

Well written. *s*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-14 12:39 PM

(sigh) Such sorrow fills these tranquil words, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) Oh Helen, I pray with all my heart love will again touch your heart and fill it with happiness! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-11-14 01:34 PM

Great write Helen. Could feel the ache and longing in this one.
Just remember to BREATHE!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2001-11-14 01:34 PM

Good write, this! Thanks for sharing!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-14 01:59 PM

Just keep breathing...things will all become clear in time and life will go on to better dreams. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-11-14 02:45 PM

OneSlickLady~

'I only
missed you
when you were
suppose to be here'

What a cool line~
Speaks volumes~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2001-11-14 06:54 PM

h

Marge beat me to it, so I'll just agree:

"I only
missed you
when you were
suppose to be here"

says so much.

e

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-12-11 03:11 AM

1slick_lady-
  Liking this, I am..
  Nicely done.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

11 posted 2001-12-11 03:26 AM

loved this..

I am many.

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