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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-14 09:55 AM


fathomless darkness
cloaking me in deep sorrow
I would never love
~*~
you walked in my life
removing all dark shadows
I am free to love

Inspired by:   …reasons to go on…



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-14-2001).]

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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-11-14 10:07 AM



Then there it is, the black to the white of it...

well done!

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2 posted 2001-11-14 11:36 AM


Interloper...this is great!  Love how you are inspired like this, and I enjoy these short ones!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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3 posted 2001-11-14 11:49 AM


*sigh* gosh how I love the ending of this poem. **big hugs** it is absolutely wonderful. Makes me smile inside. I do so love it when people are in love.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-14 11:54 AM


the freedom to love.......how wonderful!!  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-11-14 12:03 PM


  

Interloper, you are such a great friend to everyone here! Yes, that was, and still is, an fantastic, uplifting poem. Thanks for underlining it so nicely.

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6 posted 2001-11-14 12:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Interloper, this is soooooooo beautiful; love always heals our loving hearts! (smiles) You always have such dazzling inspirations, I love them all! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-11-15 06:23 PM


ohhhhh you knew that I would love these...
great work

Charisma ~*TMP*~

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8 posted 2001-11-15 06:37 PM


Hey the short one is good!

Lizzy Vivian http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

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9 posted 2001-11-15 07:43 PM


So liberating...love. Great poem.
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10 posted 2001-11-15 10:46 PM


Perfect complement to the poem.
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-11-28 02:55 PM


I love the inspirtion felt in this one!

Kathleen (Kay)
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12 posted 2001-11-28 02:59 PM


Gosh Interloper you really do have a special gift in expressing yourself in these poems you get inspired from...
I compliment you once again on a g8t write my dearFriend...
*~coco~*

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13 posted 2001-11-28 03:01 PM


A short display of night and day. Enjoyed
Interloper
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14 posted 2001-11-28 03:08 PM


A big THANK YOU to all

You are the greatest group of people on earth ... well, maybe, probably, second only to, gee, yep, the BEST

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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