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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-11-14 08:55 AM


With a child's mind
I think
What is there left to discover?

What mystery can I unlock?
What treasure can I unearth?

With pencil in hand
I draw a pirate's map
X marking the spot
Where I am to bury my treasure

Mason jar in hand
I fill it with Buffalo nickels
Shiny new cooper pennies
Tiny machine bought toys

Spade in hand
I bury it beneath the sod
Covering it over with dirt
Placing a rock upon it

Tomorrow I will dig it up
Or perhaps the next day
Excited that it's still there
Excited that I found it

Much richer for the experience


[This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 11-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-14 08:59 AM


A fine example of the treasure of
Doing

Gloom

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-11-14 09:02 AM


SongBird~
This is delightful and reminds me
of a place I need to travel back to~

You've shared a beauty-of-thought in this piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-11-14 12:43 PM



Heck, I'd be excited if I could remember where I put it...

LOL...This, I enjoyed...especially the buffalo nickels....

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4 posted 2001-11-14 12:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, such sweet innocence and treasures of memories fill these golden words! (smiles) Looks like your heart has uncovered the treasure trove of blessings! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Songbird, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-15 12:10 PM



Songbird-
   You've got me remembering with this one.
   Very nicely done, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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