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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-14 08:01 AM


An Ode for every Mode

Walking on the sands of time
Brings a stand of billow.
Though the walk is no crime it
Leaves a peccadillo.

Webs are made and knotted tight
Emotions and notions
Friendships of day and night and
Some are potent potions.

They carry us to extreme
Some of love some of hate
Seldom do we find a mean
And some outlive our date.

Symbols are our cobblestones
The building blocks of store
We travel in flesh and bone
Until there is no more

Yet live a bode for every road
And have an ode for every mode.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-14 08:09 AM




(sigh) Messages, oh how they influence us from the days of the hieroglyphics to the first word of a child, spoken through time only. (smiles) BRAVO!!! There are so many wonderful methods of communication, and each one has its own spirit, its own love, its own name. BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! I LOVE IT!!! You are always so wonderful in your words! (big hugggssssssss) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-14 09:23 AM


Walking on the sands of time
Brings a stand of billow.
Though the walk is no crime it
Leaves a peccadillo.

Webs are made and knotted tight
Emotions and notions
Friendships of day and night and
Some are potent potions.
===================================
Seldom do we find a mean
And some outlive our date.
===================================
We travel in flesh and bone
Until there is no more

Yet live a bode for every road
And have an ode for every mode.
=========================================

Your Ode of Mode ...
is the symbol for COOL
thy pen never writes a peccadillo
Your signature ... cadence kissed--golden rule  

*winkiewinkie* my WISE rhyme Stinky

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-14 09:25 AM


*giggling* oh yes, now this fits perfectly. I love it. A smile on my face and in my heart you have put this morning. Well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-14 09:31 AM



This seems to me a mighty weight
a feel that I have come too late
but better late than never, friend
we'll stand together in the end...

Nan
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5 posted 2001-11-14 09:32 AM


Kewl couplet Sweet Sy..
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-11-14 10:03 AM


Seymour~
Once more you delight my morning senses
with such brilliantly penned poetry~
Thank you for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 2001-11-14 05:46 PM


Enjoyable.  Liked the way you wrapped this one up.  Peace.
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-11-14 06:42 PM


I love the rhythm and flow of this one, Seymour.  Felt like I was skipping right along!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-11-14 07:23 PM


y, you can have an ode for every mode if I can have a rhyme for every time  
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-11-15 07:40 AM


Andrew,
Big thank you.

Lone Wolf,
Glad you liked.

Balladeer,
It's a deal.

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2001-11-15 11:05 AM


you write remarkably... always...

regards, O poet friend,
Sudhir

Martie
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12 posted 2001-11-15 11:27 AM


Sy--Always a pleasure to read your words!
HopeS
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13 posted 2001-11-15 11:57 AM


Excellently expressed Seymour
Oceans of emotions
and roads travelled , emotions unravelled
Yes apt words  for wherever go
emotions high or low
Hope

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2001-11-15 04:46 PM


Sudhir,
Thank you my friend.

Martie,
Always a pleasure to say thank you. *L*

HopeS,
Clever comment, thank you.

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