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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-11-14 07:31 AM



Someone does not know me well--
someone's playing games.
Someone strayed into my hell
where the rules are apt to change.
Someone does not understand
a game in which there is no rule.
Someone's playing games with me.
Someone? You're a fool.
You received a charity--
I met this man on equal ground.
Always he'll remember me,
and always our love be profound.

And there is nothing you can do
to make the truth, somehow, less true...
Someone? I say shame on you,
for casting shades of blue on blue.
Someone's young
with songs unsung
and so someone?
I pardon you.

Someone has a lot to learn.
I see a young moth, yet unburned.


(yep....someone wiggled a worm and I bit...grin...)
ANYBODY GOT A PAIR OF PLIARS? and maybe some peroxide....sigh...

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Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2001-11-14 07:42 AM


I hope you teach him well,
before he strikes again,
before he causes hell
and someone else the pain.


Gloom

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-11-14 07:57 AM


Well I KNOW this aint for me cuz Im an OLD SCORCHED MOTH   rofl.......
but OH BABY ... I love when you rant rhyme  

Me girlies casting curse with her wicked  wisdoms verse ..........


Someone does not know me well--
someone's playing games.
Someone strayed into my hell
======================================
And there is nothing you can do
to make the truth, somehow, less true...
Someone? I say shame on you,
for casting shades of blue on blue.
Someone's young
with songs unsung
and so someone?
I pardon you.

Someone has a lot to learn.
I see a young moth, yet unburned.
====================================


BAM!!!!!
I dont know who this is for but I can lend them some singe proof mascara  
You ROCK me twin!
me

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-11-14 11:06 AM



What JM said...

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-11-14 11:10 AM


YOU GO GIRL!!  What a way to zapp em!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-14 11:12 AM


WOW!!! I know it isn't me because I am too old but I hope you taught them a lesson in life. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2001-11-14 11:26 AM


Oh my!  Is there going to be a rumble? LOL Guess they don't call it that anymore, eh?
You go girl!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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7 posted 2001-11-14 11:29 AM


Karen,
Hey, somebody better not be messin' with our serenity! The Cavalry is here!  

ctowen
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8 posted 2001-11-14 11:37 AM


I got your back LC ...
SOMEONE is in for a rough one!!

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-11-14 11:38 AM


O YUH!
serenity blaze
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10 posted 2001-11-14 07:53 PM


Grinning here, thanks guys! I'd fill you in, but I don't want to encourage this anymore than I already have---so, "someone?" please contact me so we can clear up what I am sure is a misunderstanding.

Love to all, even YOU, "someone"!

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-14-2001).]

Larry C
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11 posted 2001-11-14 08:48 PM


serenity,
Well, shucks. Then what's a posse for?  

Midnitesun
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12 posted 2001-11-14 08:58 PM


Well, I'm sure I'm safe, being a well singed moth, not to mention I've no idea what the devil you are talking about. "Someone" better fess up and behave, serenity still weaves magic word spells...not to mention she has a posse of pipsters!
Magnus
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13 posted 2001-11-14 09:03 PM


Whewwwww, I know it is not me....over the
half century and all that...so...someone
better stay tuned....cause here she comes.


Balladeer
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14 posted 2001-11-14 09:03 PM


At last!! A worm wiggled that wasn't mine!!  
doreen peri
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15 posted 2001-11-14 09:05 PM


no, but this lucy's got some henna and a hammer .... hehe *wink*

wow!! someone's said something somewhere or somehow screwed up some but sometimes that happens, right? geesh....

i guess you pretty well summed it up, didn'tcha harpo?  

serenity blaze
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16 posted 2001-11-14 11:03 PM


sigh....serenity is SO unserene...

I'm sure it's a misunderstanding guys, but I'll give you a clue, heh heh, if I'm going to be accused of something I would at least like the pleasure of doing it....SHEESH!!!!

Larry C
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17 posted 2001-11-15 01:13 AM


serenity,
Oh! oh! oh...no, I thought I had it.

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18 posted 2001-11-15 01:23 AM


I am laughing at Baladeer for the second time tonight, and whomever "they" are, well they don't realize who they are messing with!  You will straighten it all out I know you will, but there might be one young singed little moth that is all!  Great job on this Karen.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

Duncan
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19 posted 2001-11-15 10:53 AM


Last time you did this someone thing, I had done one, too.  I thought your for me, you wondered if mine for you.  And it was all just a coincidence.  But now this post of your has all my paranoia cells screaming.  For sometimes, late at night, I lose track of what I'm doing.  Ever since someone disabled the breathalizer on my puter, I try to recall my responses in the morning.  I think I'm not, but if I am...the real someone this time, please forgive me, Serenity...sure I thought it was a good line.
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