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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-11-14 06:55 AM


Words Are My Bond

How special you are
I became extra fond
With words thus far
In forming our bond

Tantalising tastefully
With words we say
In capturing desires
Our words foreplay

Pursuing of passions
Words I’m keeping
Reaching my nights
There when sleeping

The seductive drops
In tasting each kiss
Words we drink in
Absorbed into bliss

Each word spreads
From a tongue slips
Delightful pleasures
In covering my lips

Those “if only notes
Our feelings convey
To ream of raptures
Captivating foreplay

Hope©2001


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rosepetals25
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1 posted 2001-11-14 07:55 AM


Hope,


"The seductive drops
In tasting each kiss
Words we drink in
Absorbed into bliss.."

   I like that stanza Softly sensual and well worded.  This is a nice way to start my morning

Hugs,
Tara

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2 posted 2001-11-14 08:35 AM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully romantic and softly sensual! (smiles) May these sweet words forever hold sweet meaning! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-14 08:47 AM


HopeS,
An interesting read, enjoyed.

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-11-14 10:24 AM


Thanks Tara , I am so pleased you enjoyed
Hope


HopeS
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5 posted 2001-11-14 10:26 AM


Thanks dear sweet Noah
for sharing so much
yes words do touch
I thank you
Hope


HopeS
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6 posted 2001-11-14 10:27 AM


Pleased you enjoyed Seymour
your reply is so much appreciated
Hope

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7 posted 2001-11-14 10:48 AM


You are always able to make your words so sensually beautiful. This poem is no different. It flows with sensual love. BRAVO!!!! I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-11-14 03:07 PM


Hope~
This is really quite adorably done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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9 posted 2001-11-15 09:10 AM


I loved the finale
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10 posted 2001-11-16 05:47 PM


very sensual but in a nice subtle way  

Kathleen
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