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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-14 01:07 AM


Star spangled glory fading
Flag waving decency goodbye
Actually not its fault
Being of only cloth

Immorality breaking America's heart
Dragged through unwanted sewers
Guns blamed for violence
Humans using them.... victims?

Accountability old fashioned word
Many not touching reality
Cowering before mere responsibility
Asking forgiveness without remorse

Timothy McVeigh excellent example
Babies blown to pieces
Considered "just collateral damage" (quote, 03-28-01)
No more no less

Products of civilized societies
Getting sicker and sicker
Advancements in human condition
Professed by corrupt governments

Rhyme or reason discovered
I don't think so
At least not in general
There are still saints

Just hard to find
In muck and mire
Of mortal muddy confusion
Too many answers expressed

Questions left in dust
Have been for centuries
Greed.... most successful preacher
Evil.... its loyal follower



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Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-14 01:29 AM


Sir Robert,
You are a brave man. A bold title. Heavy issues here and none are pretty. But all unavoidable. Evil is to be confronted for fear we'll let it win.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-14 10:02 AM


Wonderful, Sir Robert. You write with power about a very hard subject. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-11-15 08:53 AM


Robert, I think more saints than evil doers.  

A piece that took courage to post.  Congratulations!

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