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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-11-14 12:28 PM

Do you know the time of night,
...just before the dawn?
When parents sleep and children dream,
...of fairies on the lawn?
When night and day are one the same,
...and dreams come ever true?
Then take my hand and fly with me,
...up to the heavens blue,
Amongst the stars and comets bright,
...unto the land of Dream,
Where hate and fear are unknown words,
...and love is all supreme,
Where pain and drugs are make believe,
...and unicorns are real,
Where happiness and tenderness,
...are all you ever feel,
As butterflies and turtle doves,
...frolic in the sun,
Puppy dogs and teddy bears,
...through verdant meadows run,
Little boys and little girls,
...playing hide and seek,
With elephants and platypus,
...careful! do not peek!
Lancelot and Guenevere,
...ride on their horse snow white,
Seeking out their Camelot,
...beneath moon's golden light,
"All Aboard," conductor yells,
...soar on our train with us,
We're never late, because time flies,
...atop of Pegasus,
Up above a purple kite,
...dances on the wind,
As up ahead a leprechaun,
...jigs around the bend,
The engine's wheels go clickety-clack,
...upon the licorice track,
As we head to land of Dream,
...we're never coming back.
Where floods and storms just don't exist,
...and clouds are sweet whipped cream,
Will you take your hand in mine,
...and fly to land of Dream?

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2001-11-14 12:39 PM

Quite a flight of fancy. Enjoyed

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2001-11-14 01:40 AM

Very nice, I love fantasy poems, everything about dreaming is wonderful. Well written

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-11-14 02:28 AM

Tim~
It is soooooooooooooo good to see you~
You've been greatly missed, my friend~

This is an adorably precious write~
*Hugs*
Come back soon please~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-14 03:09 AM

What a fun night write!

"Where hate and fear are unknown words,
...and love is all supreme,
Where pain and drugs are make believe,
...and unicorns are real,
Where happiness and tenderness,
...are all you ever feel,"

That's my kind of dream world.

Now, how do we make this real?

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-11-14 01:38 PM

Excellent - It seems to me that dreamland is one of the few safe places to be these days... Clicking my heels three times here...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-11-14 01:47 PM

I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! Filled with all the magical and mystical things I love the most. BRAVO!!!!!Bravo!!!!

more please

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-11-14 02:08 PM

Will you take your hand in mine,
...and fly to land of Dream?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In a heartbeat, Tim!!
I would love to go with you,
and I know some magic words if that will help.

This poem is chuck full of my favourite things and boy, did I enjoy it!
I am smiling from here to Camelot.
Great write of fun and fantasy!!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-11-14 03:00 PM

Tim, this is an absolute delight! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2001-11-14 07:46 PM

Of course I will! This is charming and delightful, Tim!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-11-24 12:12 PM

I immersed myself in this dream..thank you for this beautiful poem

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2001-11-24 12:43 PM

Tim,
delightful write full,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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