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0 posted 2001-11-13 09:12 PM




Imitations Of Eden
By: Noah Eaton
4/28/01

Eve reigns as queen in my world
Surrounding me in her Utopian gardens
Adam sighs within me, guiding me to this dream girl
To her palace in my desires mountains

She frolics freely among the miles of flowers
Playing with her nature friends under the rainbows
Smiling and giggling with delight, with a youthful shower
Singing with the birds, dancing and spinning in circles

Her soft long brown hair flinging freely in the wind
Sapphire eyes tearing with joy, glowing like novas
Soft red ruby lips smiling as happy as can be in high spirits
A beautiful goddess body warming with pure love

How she naturally makes my heart beat faster when I’m close to her
Watching her eyes stare into mine, knowing she too loves me
She stands naked before me, screaming in pure rapture
I welcome my Eve into my arms, kissing her passionately

At last I hold her, climbing aboard her magic unicorn ride
Soaring off into the soft blue skies to her palace
Kissing her all the way there, feeling her warm breath tingle my neck, feeling my heart light
Feeling butterflies flutter in my heart, with hers to mine, in attached lips

Now I sleep at night in heaven, with her head beside mine
Crying in joy hearing her moan in her sleep, as I have my hand massaging her smooth velvet backside
In the candlelight I can see her shine beautifully, glowing with happiness
I wake up in the morning to look into her beautiful eyes, as she opens hers and smiles in bliss

Forever I will frolic in the meadows with her, holding her hands in loves dance
Laughing and smiling with her, becoming one together in heavenly prance
The day I fell in love, these Imitations Of Eden swimming throughout my head
Eve moans within me now, the wife of my heart dreaming beside me in Eden’s bed




© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-13 09:15 PM


Noah, you ARE a romantic soul...by the way what happened to Adam ??? ROFL

Kathleen
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2 posted 2001-11-13 09:51 PM


Noah, maybe you ARE Adam. This is very beautiful.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-11-14 11:37 AM


So incredibly romantic, Noah. This one just flows from your heart to your pen. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-15 08:57 AM


Pretty romantic stuff, Noah
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