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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-13 08:38 PM


When love came calling
Large as life
In the doorway
My future stands

My best friend
My mate
Knowing it is she
Eyes reflecting my destiny

Her love for me
Sculpted in God's grace
Tenderly tapping
On my heart's door

Her beauty
Invisible to so many
But clearly seen
By this man's spirit

Here to take me
From this empty loveless home
This lovely mortal angel
Calling at long last



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1 posted 2001-11-13 08:42 PM


How very very romantic Sir Robert!
And...very well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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2 posted 2001-11-13 08:43 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo lovely! (sigh) Your heart is always lighting with so much to give, and she will always love you, for your love is eternal! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, love will always shine to your heart! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-13 11:42 PM


*sigh* I am lost in the beauty of this one, Sir Robert. I so wish you had a love in your life to share your amazing heart with.  **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C
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4 posted 2001-11-14 01:17 AM


Sir Robert,
Great Poem. It's nice to know you'll recognize her when she arrives!  

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5 posted 2001-11-14 03:22 PM



Very tender....lovely....

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-11-14 04:49 PM


"Tenderly tapping on my hearts door."
Prefect description...James

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