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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-11-13 01:20 PM



Thank You

I cannot express
The love that grows in my heart
Strong every day.
I thank you from the bottom
Of my heart for loving me.




For my Dave, who I love more than I thought possible.  Thank you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-13 01:32 PM


you are so cute   this is so sweet.   he'd be nuts not to love you  
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2 posted 2001-11-13 01:38 PM



This is wonderful...and you've not even begun to think yet!

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3 posted 2001-11-13 03:13 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Tara, you are just so sweet, we all love you so very much! (kisses on cheeks) Muah! (smiles) Thank you for being such a special and loving friend to me always, I love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-13 03:16 PM


I think you have only just begun to express it...James
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5 posted 2001-11-13 03:20 PM


beautiful expression of love lady poetess.  Wonderful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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6 posted 2001-11-13 04:40 PM


THANK YOU..for always sharing you beautiful creations with us. Very sweet tanka

Love,
RosePetal

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7 posted 2001-11-13 08:38 PM


as always, i am in awe, my dear.
~bows dramatically, overtly decides that's not good enough, and throws himself at your feet and bangs his forehead on the floor~
!!
ow.
and i love you too  
-Dave

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8 posted 2001-11-14 12:02 PM


*sigh* such a sweet and romantic thank you. I love it and I can see he loves it too. You two are such a joy to see.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-11-14 11:57 PM



rosepetals-
   What a lovely and tender expression
   of your love and gratitude.
   Beautifully done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2001-11-24 02:10 AM


aint love grand...  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

wornways
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11 posted 2001-11-24 02:12 AM


i quite enjoyed this
i've not yet written tanka
until this moment
in commenting on your poem
is "strong" meant to be "stronger"


WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

[This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-24-2001).]

rosepetals25
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12 posted 2001-11-24 09:05 AM


Thank youi all for  your replies    I must have forgotten about this.. I usually reply to my replies.. sorry    I'm glad you all enjoyed.

wornways - Welcome to the land of Tankas I love tankas... those and haikus are my favorite form of poetry I think    Just remember the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count   I hope to see more tankas from you.. they are fun

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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13 posted 2001-11-24 11:35 AM


enjoyed it
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