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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-13 12:06 PM



Look to the skies and
find my spirit
dancing on rainbows
feel the softness of
pastel in my touch and in
the brilliance of sunshine
you’ll see my eyes

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-13 12:15 PM



Well of course this has me smiling....

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-11-13 05:08 PM


AWhispersCaress~

'feel the softness of
pastel in my touch'


Ohhhhh, what a pretty little thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-13 07:28 PM


This poem is as soft and brilliant as the heart of the one who created it. Wonderful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-11-13 07:30 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Annie! (smiles) Your heart always glows with sweet love and rapture that light all our hearts! (big hugggssssss) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-11-14 08:18 PM



Whisper's Caress-
   What lovely thoughts in this simple little verse.
   Really enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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6 posted 2001-11-14 08:32 PM


If only I could say so much in so few
expressed thoughts....  

I envy you...

Nice,  soft and touching.

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