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SEA
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0 posted 2001-11-13 09:33 AM



in sleepless dreams I find you
when the world fades grey
when you whisper to my soul
things I need to hear you say

immersed in darkness
lost in mind’s reality
I reach out
feel you reaching back for me

in shadows you see me
my heart, so exposed
unable to keep curtains drawn
doors can’t be closed

you come in, take your fill
leave me begging you, take more
this want to please you
unlike anything before

as new day dawns
your touch becomes memory
till once again your whispers return
haunting me


~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-11-13 09:40 AM


till once again your whispers return
haunting me
...

I liked this one, SEA...

For myself, I don't know for sure whether it is the dreams that follow to become reality or if reality stays back to reappear as dreams...  

Regards,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2001-11-13 09:58 AM




(sigh) Such a haunting but wonderful poem, dearest Susan! (smiles) Sometimes there are dreams and memories that we cherish so very much, then others we don't feel too welcome to and come back again. (sigh) BRAVO!!! Wonderful expressions, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-13 12:10 PM


Fantastic write.
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4 posted 2001-11-13 02:00 PM


sometimes what we are left with is so haunting.......this is wonderful Sea....thank you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-11-13 02:02 PM



Keep exploring....you'll find it, because you hear it....

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6 posted 2001-11-13 03:02 PM


I kindof believe what we give out we receive...our fantasies do come to life in some form...James
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7 posted 2001-11-13 06:46 PM


I like the last two lines.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
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8 posted 2001-11-13 07:09 PM


well you already know I love this one..
hauntingly beautiful whispers.
another one from the "unending ache" series  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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9 posted 2001-11-13 07:12 PM


till once again your whispers return
haunting me.....

I loved this part very much...course the entire poem was very powerful....thanx Sue.

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10 posted 2001-11-13 07:54 PM


Susan chickie,

    Have I told you I love your writing...(only about 100 times right )  

    I enjoyed   Wonderfully worded and very haunting...


Hugs,
Tara

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11 posted 2001-11-13 07:57 PM


Sea...This is beautiful!  Love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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12 posted 2001-11-13 08:05 PM



Haunted in dreams
touch becomes reality
again
may it last
for
ever and ever

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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13 posted 2001-11-13 08:50 PM


My Stars Agnes, SEA, I hate to see just how good you are going to get when you get older..very gentle smile and a shake of my head at your talent
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14 posted 2001-11-13 10:17 PM


Sue,
Lovely write. Always tender and warm. Love it!  

Nan
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15 posted 2001-11-14 08:22 AM


Our Sleepless Dreams - We can take them where ever our hearts desire... Nicely written, Sea - HHave a Happy Birthday..
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16 posted 2001-11-14 08:37 AM





Happy B-day Susan

SEA
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thank you all very much,and Logan, you are far too kind  

Nan and Janet...THANK YOU so far so good  

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18 posted 2001-11-14 10:19 AM


Happy Birthday Sweet Sea!
SEA
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thank you!!!

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20 posted 2001-11-14 11:04 AM


WOW!!!!A great poem and your birthday too. WOW!!!!
  



Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.


[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-14-2001).]

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21 posted 2001-11-14 11:13 AM


enjoy
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22 posted 2001-11-14 04:46 PM


Happy Dirthday!

~*~
my whispers reveal
my total devotion dear
carried on the wind

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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23 posted 2001-11-14 05:14 PM




Happy happy birthday Susan.

And what a wonderful poem, missed reading your work lately.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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24 posted 2001-11-15 05:27 PM


I too, love the last two lines. The whole poem has such a sweet ache to it.

Hope your birthday was a wonderful one, Susan.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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