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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-13 08:11 AM






Lingering Embrace
By: Noah Eaton
11/12/01

Tongues of flame lick these white chocolate walls
My tongue touching yours in passions flame
My hands close to your breast, caressing your soft face
Escaping into lovers fairy-tales as the smooth dreamy jazz plays

Lingering touches whisper, warm lips feeling lovers breath
Burning soft and tender together, suckling loves honey
Moistness swaying across a lovers mouth, tingling gently
Exhaling in rapture, inhaling again in passions kiss, lips moaning

Fingers intertwined, fingertips touching, stroking creamy hair
Embracing the soft summer breeze of her dreams
Whispering in your ear sonnets as smooth as the ocean waves
Silk memories and satin hopes together we weave

Tasting your sweet tongue gently in lingering kiss
To your angelic heart I will eternally succumb
As she kisses my neck softly with her luscious lips
Embraced by my dream girl, my one true love...



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-13-2001).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-11-13 08:34 AM


Lingering Embrace, that is such a wonderful thing...

and so is your rendition of it...

Regards,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2001-11-13 09:18 AM


good grief Noah! You just warmed up my morning   This is wonderful if a bit on the steamy side, whew!  
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3 posted 2001-11-13 01:59 PM



Tasting your sweet tongue gently in lingering kiss
To your angelic heart I will eternally succumb
As she kisses my neck softly with her luscious lips
Embraced by my dream girl, my one true love...


lingering kisses are the best kind Noah.  Warm and tender write.  *s*


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2001-11-13 04:36 PM


Noah,

You pen the most beautiful poetry...I hope someday I am lucky enough to find a guy just like you. Love you ((tight hugs))
RP

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5 posted 2001-11-14 08:05 AM


WOOHOO!!  sweet noah..have i NOT read you before??  jeez!  this is good stuff!!  WOWWY!  

you dreamy romantic you....  

great writing noah..much enjoyed--what a wake up this morn..*sigh*.....lol!

hugs, g  

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

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6 posted 2001-11-14 08:49 AM


I like the embraces that linger...James
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7 posted 2001-11-28 01:18 PM



Everyone should have a dream - when it becomes reality, let us know...meanwhile, we'll keep smiling with you...

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8 posted 2001-11-28 01:23 PM


*Giggle* This is excellent, Noah.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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