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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-11-13 02:10 AM


To have a Sister like you
I consider myself blessed
Sibblings are a special gift
In me, you bring out the best

At times we tend to disagree
I know it's not a lack of maturity
Sometimes we can't see eye to eye
We are close but we have different minds

In you, I find comfort to confide
You sense what it is I try to hide
We show understanding and respect
You're a valuable diamond I protect

I can only hope we'll remain this close
Cause being apart from you is what I fear most
We've shared secrets and laughter
Unhappiness, Pain, and everything after

You have a radiance so beautiful
A heart so tender beyond the usual
You'll always be my best friend for certain
So if ever you're hurtin....I'll be here for you
There's a bright world awaiting us
Behind every dark blue curtain


© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-11-13 05:13 AM


What a beautiful tribute to your sister Rosepetal! Oh, I do hope you've presented this piece to her ... I'm sure she'll treasure it! Very nicely done.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-11-13 07:18 AM


There's a bright world awaiting us
Behind every dark blue curtain

.... Oh, yes... there is ...

and this one is a wonderful write to your sister...

Regards,
sudhir

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3 posted 2001-11-13 08:14 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so sweet of you to write such a beautiful poem for your loving sister! (sigh) Kim is soooooo lucky to have such a sweet loving sister like you, as together your love will glow always! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Joanna, I love you! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-13 06:59 PM


*grin* I bet she just loves this poem. BRAVO!!!Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-13 07:04 PM


Very nice message for your sister! Hope she gets to read this.
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6 posted 2001-11-28 01:14 PM



A delightful rendition in the art of sisterhood...

Enjoyed this!

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