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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-13 01:45 AM


Secrets of A Smile

Tell them how
you made me
fall in love
with you.

"I smiled at you."

And what happened
after that?

"You smiled back."

Then I knew love could
be yours and mine
until the end of time
if I could capture
the secret of
those smiles.

JamesLee
November12
2001



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1 posted 2001-11-13 01:54 AM


Now that must have been one very fantastic smile, James. Very nicely done!  I also liked the visual presentation of this one.
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-11-13 05:14 AM


Ah, the secret in a smile ... captivating indeed. Much enjoyed James.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-11-13 07:14 AM


very enjoyable one...

James, my friend,
My regards to you,
Sudhir

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4 posted 2001-11-13 07:27 AM


James,
  
    Sweet read James   I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2001-11-13 08:39 AM




(smiles) And forever and ever, you and Jin will smile together, for your sweet love is real and pure. (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are soooooooo romantic! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you
6 posted 2001-11-13 09:15 AM


how wonderful James  
Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-13 06:54 PM


*sigh* isn't it amazing what a simple smile can do. I love this poem, James.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-11-13 07:19 PM


Like the shining loving eyes of a faithful
pet...us humans use a smile to say and do
so much as a nonverbal communication.  

Smiles mean a lot to me....I try to always
give them away frequently....

Nice...enjoyed.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2001-11-13 07:52 PM


SBJ...this ones beauty is in its simply succinct sweet sincerety...
love the last lines intend and pondering.
well done poet sir  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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10 posted 2001-11-13 08:07 PM


Loved this poem just about as much as I love smiles!  
I collect them!  
~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Larry C
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11 posted 2001-11-14 01:19 AM


James,
So the eyes weren't even a clue? Come on! That's alot of smile.  

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12 posted 2001-11-15 08:46 AM


Smilin' here.  Well done, James
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