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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2001-11-13 12:27 PM


The actuality of syntality
is an unreality.
I am not WE.
But a synthesis
of left and right
yields the combination
of US.
The antithesis of
disunity and analogy,
diametrically and dialectically
opposed views
can and do co-exist,
even in a world
where
insanity rules.


(Webster's definiton)
syntality: behavioral characteristics of a group perceived as parallel to, or inferable from, the personality structure of an individual

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-13-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-13 02:22 AM


You want to pass whatever you're smoking over here?  Sorry Kacy, I think the darkness is getting to you.  Walk outside with a flashlight.  Take a deep breath.  Then again, maybe it's me.
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2 posted 2001-11-13 05:10 AM


I enjoy a nice thought-provoking verse to get me going in the morning Midnitesun ... and this piece nicely fit the bill.  Much enjoyed your in-depth ponderings this morning ... now on to another cup of tea!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-11-13 07:19 AM


diametrically and dialectically
opposed views
can and do co-exist,
....

that is so well-said... and true...

you have needled my imagination well... thought-provoking is right...

Regards,
Sudhir

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4 posted 2001-11-13 08:24 AM




(sigh) Disunity and analogy are indeed parallel, though they co-exist on the same plane, bringing both all the various opinions and the romance of comparison in focus. (sigh) I feel we do all co-exist, and while not in unity, it's a wonder anyway to experience with so many others with the love and feelings they have to express! (sigh) BRAVO!!! VERY THOUGHT-PROVOKING!!! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-11-13 12:01 PM



Bravo!  Another poet who loves to play with words and their meanings....

YES!

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6 posted 2001-11-13 12:32 PM


Duncan, I had to laugh at your reply. Yes, we are down to barely 6 hrs day of pale light. Sorry, smoking isn't good for you, I'll not contribute to your delinquency.  
Now, where the heck is that giant circular flashlight ?????

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7 posted 2001-11-13 12:41 PM


Kit, thanks for sipping tea with me, and just for being here each day to share your thoughts.

Sudhir,   anytime. You honor me with this reply, as your poetry always makes me think, as well as feel your warm heart.

Noah, I like that phrase, "the romance of comparison" Can I borrow it? Yes, all the various hues and views blend into a rainbow, yet are still distinctive, as they should be.

Sunshine, yes. I really do love to play around with words. Thanks for playing with me in the Pips playground.

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8 posted 2001-11-13 07:06 PM


The antithesis of
disunity and analogy,
diametrically and dialectically
opposed views
can and do co-exist,
even in a world
where
insanity rules.
============================

ooooohhh  very cool poem ...
I love the vocabulary ...I love learning new words  
So Im off to the dictionary....
(dont have to look up insane..my pic is there)  
Clever write of deep thought and word play.
well done poetess Kacy.

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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9 posted 2001-11-13 08:11 PM


Janet, LOL at the 'insane' part of your reply. Thanks for the comments.
Glad to help out old Webster. At least I gave everyone syntality.  

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10 posted 2001-11-13 10:03 PM


Very good, Kacy, extremely thoughtful and interesting.
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-11-13 10:09 PM


Midnitesun,
Looks like you assumed I'd show up. Thanks for the definition!  

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12 posted 2001-11-13 10:10 PM


Kacy...very interesting!  Now may I have a Tylenol and the dictionary?
lol....this is a very unique write and I am enjoying learning new words!  
Guess that old saying...'you're never too old'...is true!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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13 posted 2001-11-13 10:22 PM


Sandra, glad you liked it.

Larry, LOL. Exactly. Thought I'd save you a trip to Webster's.

Nancy,   Sorry 'bout the brain buster. Excedrin headache #101? Tylenol just never does it for me. LOL. Hope you have the BIG Webster's version.

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14 posted 2001-11-14 12:54 PM


Our opposing halves yet manage to work together....walking, even thinking from both sides. An ambitious ambidextrous write..er..left...well you know what I mean, nothing underhanded about it.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

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15 posted 2001-11-14 01:02 AM


LOL at your reply, Richard. I've been accused of being so excessively right-brained that I'm lopsided. ROTLMAO. It's probably true.

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16 posted 2001-11-14 05:08 PM


Glad I noticed this one, Kacy -- a most exhilirating mental workout.  Nothing like a few read-reps to get the cerebrum tingling and the serotonin flowing.  I enjoyed the metaphors and multiple layers of meaning in this one.  It reminded me of something I would write lately.  

-MVS

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17 posted 2001-11-14 05:19 PM


Well now, Mark, that's a hefty complement. Thanks! Glad you didn't miss it. It took a some effort from my back-up brain data bank to write this one. I had another version I wrote a year ago, but this one is better. You guys keep me on my toes more in this board that any others I've visited.  
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18 posted 2001-11-14 07:25 PM


I love when a poet reaches way back into the old noggin and really works at getting the words out. . . this one makes you think and challenges you. . . I love it when a poem can do that. . .

excellent. . .

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19 posted 2001-11-14 07:30 PM


I'd give my right arm to be ambidextrous....I think  
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20 posted 2001-11-14 07:43 PM


Go ahead....ask me....ask me if I have a
shred of a clue....Where is the Funk and
Wagnall's when I realllllly needed it...

This was sharp...so scintilatingly so..


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21 posted 2001-11-14 08:46 PM


Sven, thank you! But sometimes I reach deep into this old brain and come up empty handed. LOL  

Balladeer, I'll bet you're really ambi-everything... LOL

Magnus, LOL at your reply. Need an English translation?
How did you know I was working on one about scintillation?? The title will be a play on words. It's not ready to post yet, started it yesterday, needs a little polishing.

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22 posted 2001-12-12 01:53 AM



Midnitesun-
   I REALLY enjoyed this!
   I love reading things that make me think,
   and I especially enjoy playing with words.
   This fit both bills..
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


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you have not truly met the poet.
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23 posted 2001-12-13 02:50 AM


Vicky, thank you for that reply! I also really enjoy the brain teasers and word play poems.
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