How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #16 Archive
 You burn it with passion
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

You burn it with passion

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
walker
Member Elite
since 02-11-2001
Posts 2348
Florida


0 posted 11-14-2001 07:46 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for walker


I watch as you sleep
so close you are to me
yet so far away
Everytime I try to reach your
unreachable shore
I succumb to this vagueness
without hope
I offer love
but you burn it
with passion
I start all over from
the other side of my world
I try to tell you
I love you
my way
by giving you love
kissing you
deep and soft
like none before
But I fail to tell you
I love you
One night you
will look into my eyes
at the right moment
when our souls are connected
and feel my love
no need for words
Just let it flow
into our hearts
our love


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
wornways
Member
since 10-18-2001
Posts 214
CA, USA


1 posted 11-14-2001 08:26 PM       View Profile for wornways   Email wornways   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit wornways's Home Page   View IP for wornways

but opening the mouth and saying it also counts for a lot. however, let not words stand alone... for then they count not at all, and are in fact quite meaningless, even damaging.
Digitalfaith21
New Member
since 11-16-2001
Posts 3
Aurora, IL


2 posted 11-16-2001 03:35 PM       View Profile for Digitalfaith21   Email Digitalfaith21   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Digitalfaith21

Wow I really liked this one...so deep and so true...I think everyone can relate to this feeling atleast once in their life...

Jennifer
Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 08-07-2001
Posts 5716


3 posted 11-16-2001 11:55 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I offer love
but you burn it
with passion

Very cool way to put it, walker.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


4 posted 01-20-2003 04:19 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

*sigh* beautiful!
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #16 >> You burn it with passion Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors