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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-13 10:00 PM


I thrive just like a flower
In the garden of your love
I become the brightest star
In your constellation high above

How recklessly I dive
Into your sensual sea
The enormous waves of desire
How they wash right over me

You're my oasis in the desert
Such a welcoming sight you are
I have climbed the peaks of your passion
And wished upon your shooting star

You're the pillow where I lay
After travelling many paths
You and I together have discovered
The finest love to forever last

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-11-13 10:20 PM


Lovely work, Sue.  So light and full of love!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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2 posted 2001-11-13 11:13 PM




CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM TO CELEBRATE YOUR 1000 MILESTONE!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! (big hugggssssss) YOU ARE SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC, SWEET SUE, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek)



You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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