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Open Poetry #16

Liquid Distraction

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-13 07:56 PM

Liquid Distraction

every time I look
the kaleidoscope changes
mobile turning ‘round
holding it to my eyes
slipping stones move
color rearranges

tilting turning
to the light
shapes appear
and disappear
when I don’t hold
my eyes just right

ending as fast
as it began
melting liquid motion
explodes in color
dazzling emotional commotion

a catch of eye
life’s attraction
gentle forgetfulness
in unexpected distraction

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 11-14-2001).]

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

1 posted 2001-11-13 10:12 PM

1Slick_lady

The constant change of a kaleidoscope
In every turn comes a unique creation
With all the colors of a rainbow

"a catch of eye
life's attraction
gentle forgetfulness
in unexpected distraction"

enjoyed this very much

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-13 10:15 PM

Very profound write, Helen. Much enjoyed!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-11-14 07:15 PM

lots of angles and colors here helen. . .

excellent. . .

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