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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-11-13 05:14 PM



Remember
the need
to spend
time together
Skipping classes
a motel room
some wine cooler
and our love
Eager kisses
unplanned passion
liberating to our souls
Only that moment mattered
no parents
no teachers
no worries
just us
in love

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-11-13 05:35 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, the shape of the poem almost looks like a beautiful woman in a dress! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, I love it, and your heart will forever sing in happiness to the love you share! (big hugggssssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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2 posted 2001-11-13 05:39 PM


If we could turn back time...
Magnus
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3 posted 2001-11-13 06:26 PM


Wow....this brought back so many memories..
Ummmmm...wine coolers....and the passion
of young love,  burning so brightly in
the four eyes closed together as each found
that moment in time....  

Thanx...

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
4 posted 2001-11-13 06:36 PM


*sigh* young, innocent love that lives for each moment. If only we always would embrace love so wonderfully. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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5 posted 2001-11-13 09:36 PM


.....and nothing else mattered as you lived for the moment.  No truer words of love have been spoken.  This was so romantic, I loved it.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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