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Startime
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0 posted 2001-11-13 04:10 PM


How Is It Should I Love You?

How Is It Should I Love You?

Should I write sweet tender words
telling how my heart begins to melt
Painting pictures how I feel
writing that I would make you mine
Pen about souls sent to find their match
using words to write of love

How Is It Should I Love You?

Should I weave a magic spell
bring you with me into fantasy
Create dreams of love for you to see,
teach you how to dragon fly
Take you soaring to mountain tops
and walk with you in magic forest glade

How Is It Should I Love You?

With kisses soft and sweet,
and eyes that shine just for you
Reach, touch, feeling flesh,
arms to hold with tenderness
Whispered words that you are dear
sharing tender lover’s touch

How Is It Should I Love YOU???

Karen Torbiak©


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-11-13 05:31 PM


How is it should I love your words
Of feelings and thoughts and birds
of memories that a love has shared
of times for two of true love cared.

See....you get us going....Nicely
written lady...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-13 05:38 PM




(smiles) Give him all the love his heart desires, and he will love you just the same, for your loving heart is filled with such romance and will touch your dream man's heart eternally! (smiles) Soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-11-13 05:59 PM


All of the above.  Quite well done, Karen.
Larry C
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4 posted 2001-11-13 09:04 PM


Karen,
I could handle that! Nice wrtie.  

Suetang
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5 posted 2001-11-13 09:33 PM


Karen
I believe you have shown him through your words how much you love him and that is a gift in itself! Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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