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I Traced You Last Night

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Larry C
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I Traced You Last Night
By Larry Chadwick

I trace the highlights of your face,
Feeling emotions that you always share.
Gentle reminders of the reasons why,
I like to trace the lines that are there.

Subtly that line traces down your neck,
Where I find such aromatic memories.
I could easily get distracted right here,
Tracing your line with no time to tease.

And then the rising curves of your body,
Ahhh, yes the high points of my desires.
My pausing here seems only natural,
A place that always starts burning fires.

But there's another place that this line leads,
That little button that invites me to stop in.
A spot that recalls so many happy times,
Just being here makes you laugh again.

Your giggles sweetly encourage me on,
Tracing further past those hips I go.
Mindful of their swaying capabilities,
Seductively reminding me I love you so.

My fingers trace down those sexy legs,
That gives you the power to run away.
While they lift your body up to me,
They provide strength for you to stay.

And then my fingers find your feet,
How they make you putty in my hands.
But donít forget theyíre a source of joy,
Turning most sadness into ticklish plans.

Now that I have traced you from head to toe,
It helps me understand what makes you whole.
Iíve learned to love the completeness of you,
And when Iím done you have etched my soul.

© Copyright 2001 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-13-2001 10:56 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

OHMYGOSHLARRY!!!  
YOUR Nancy Lee is one lucky lady!
This is very beautifully done
...and left me with a smile on my face this morning.
~Hugs....the 'other' Nancy Lee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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Nancy Lee,
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3 posted 11-13-2001 11:42 AM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

standing ovation for an excellent piece.....
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4 posted 11-13-2001 11:49 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

A Whisper's Caress,
Wow, thanks alot.  
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WOW!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and sensual, I love it!!! (smiles) Your love for her is complete, as will the love you share last eternally! (smiles) What a beautiful feeling of love! (big hugggssssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Your best poem ever. No way can you top this one.  Sensual, a slight hint of typical Larry humor, a tingling delight from head to toe. I'm keeping this one, you know. It's mine now, and I'll pretend someone wrote it for me.  .
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And then my fingers find your feet,
How they make you putty in my hands.
But donít forget theyíre a source of joy,
Turning most sadness into ticklish plans.

Of all the verse I could've picked, this is my fav...guess I'm sick.  Good one, Larry.
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8 posted 11-13-2001 12:46 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Noah,
Thanks for those kind words.  

Midnitesun,
The kindest words I've ever heard from you. Thanks for the huge compliment!  

Duncan,
Well now, can't blame me for your reputation, eh? Thanks.  
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WOW!!!!This poem is breathtaking........absolutely perfect. Now this is romance at its very finest. VERY WELL DONE, LARRY. Your nancy is one very lucky lady indeed. MAGNIFICENT.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 11-13-2001 04:07 PM       View Profile for Domzi   Email Domzi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Domzi

Great poem!

Do or die!

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Startime,
Breathtaking...are you sure?  

Domzi,
Nice to meet you. Welcome to Passions. And thanks for the compliment.  
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Don't Ever erase this!!! Every line..is squarely dead center and perfect. You didn't need any help after all   A trace in most penning fashion. cept I wouldn't have been able to stand still long enough! Did you use permanent ink??? Did I say how much I loved this?

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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Larry...Very nicely done....Now...if I can
only find a pencil and the sheet of paper
to go under her warm sensual body.....My
wife would love this...
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Regina,
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Magnus,
Thanks, this was a fun write! But it took thirty years of dreaming to write. I've concluded romantic poetry is probably a one shot deal for me. But one for two ain't bad.
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simply sensual...  
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cottage.
Simply thanks.
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Do you hear the echo in this little box of all the compliments on your poem?  

Thanks for the REally nice reminder of how love should be.


  

Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold

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All I can say is "WOW"
Peaches
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20 posted 11-16-2001 12:54 PM       View Profile for Abigaile   Email Abigaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abigaile

These words are so beautiful. I love the imagery. Well written. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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I just wanted to say that your poem was really sweet....especially the last part where you say that you have learned to love the completeness.....to understand beauty is to get all the aspects of the person....

Jennifer
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Apachecat,
Yes I heard what you heard. It is very humbling. This was a fun poem to write and a pleasant surprise as romantic poetry is an interest of mine to read but unable typically to write. Your words are very kind.
  

Peaches,
Back at you! Thank you.

Abigaile,
Thank you so very much.  

Jennifer,
I am glad you understood the message of this poem so well. Thank you.

Anybody who knows my poetry is probably (almost) as surprised as me that this came from my pen. Thank you for your generous response. I am truly blessed.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.††larry c

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-16-2001).]

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Well now..what's this??? Our funny guy Larry with a passionate romantic side?? I was waiting for the punch line here!! lol. Seriously, this is a beautiful, sensuous piece of poetry, and I love that last line

And when Iím done you have etched my soul

Beautiful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Tracey,
Yup, just tender hearted little old me. Lettin' that tiger out!  
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