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I Traced You Last Night
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I Traced You Last Night |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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I Traced You Last Night By Larry Chadwick I trace the highlights of your face, Feeling emotions that you always share. Gentle reminders of the reasons why, I like to trace the lines that are there. Subtly that line traces down your neck, Where I find such aromatic memories. I could easily get distracted right here, Tracing your line with no time to tease. And then the rising curves of your body, Ahhh, yes the high points of my desires. My pausing here seems only natural, A place that always starts burning fires. But there's another place that this line leads, That little button that invites me to stop in. A spot that recalls so many happy times, Just being here makes you laugh again. Your giggles sweetly encourage me on, Tracing further past those hips I go. Mindful of their swaying capabilities, Seductively reminding me I love you so. My fingers trace down those sexy legs, That gives you the power to run away. While they lift your body up to me, They provide strength for you to stay. And then my fingers find your feet, How they make you putty in my hands. But don’t forget they’re a source of joy, Turning most sadness into ticklish plans. Now that I have traced you from head to toe, It helps me understand what makes you whole. I’ve learned to love the completeness of you, And when I’m done you have etched my soul. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHMYGOSHLARRY!!! YOUR Nancy Lee is one lucky lady! This is very beautifully done ...and left me with a smile on my face this morning. ~Hugs....the 'other' Nancy Lee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nancy Lee,  |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
standing ovation for an excellent piece..... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
A Whisper's Caress, Wow, thanks alot.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and sensual, I love it!!! (smiles) Your love for her is complete, as will the love you share last eternally! (smiles) What a beautiful feeling of love! (big hugggssssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your best poem ever. No way can you top this one. Sensual, a slight hint of typical Larry humor, a tingling delight from head to toe. I'm keeping this one, you know. It's mine now, and I'll pretend someone wrote it for me.  . |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And then my fingers find your feet, How they make you putty in my hands. But don’t forget they’re a source of joy, Turning most sadness into ticklish plans. Of all the verse I could've picked, this is my fav...guess I'm sick. Good one, Larry. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Thanks for those kind words. Midnitesun, The kindest words I've ever heard from you. Thanks for the huge compliment! Duncan, Well now, can't blame me for your reputation, eh? Thanks. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!This poem is breathtaking........absolutely perfect. Now this is romance at its very finest. VERY WELL DONE, LARRY. Your nancy is one very lucky lady indeed. MAGNIFICENT.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great poem! Do or die! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Startime, Breathtaking...are you sure? Domzi, Nice to meet you. Welcome to Passions. And thanks for the compliment. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Don't Ever erase this!!! Every line..is squarely dead center and perfect. You didn't need any help after all A trace in most penning fashion. cept I wouldn't have been able to stand still long enough! Did you use permanent ink??? Did I say how much I loved this?Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Larry...Very nicely done....Now...if I can only find a pencil and the sheet of paper to go under her warm sensual body.....My wife would love this... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, Thanks, this was a fun write! But it took thirty years of dreaming to write. I've concluded romantic poetry is probably a one shot deal for me. But one for two ain't bad. |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
simply sensual... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
cottage. Simply thanks. |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Do you hear the echo in this little box of all the compliments on your poem? Thanks for the REally nice reminder of how love should be. Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
All I can say is "WOW" Peaches  |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
These words are so beautiful. I love the imagery. Well written. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Digitalfaith21 New Member
since 2001-11-16
Posts 3Aurora, IL |
I just wanted to say that your poem was really sweet....especially the last part where you say that you have learned to love the completeness.....to understand beauty is to get all the aspects of the person.... Jennifer |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Apachecat, Yes I heard what you heard. It is very humbling. This was a fun poem to write and a pleasant surprise as romantic poetry is an interest of mine to read but unable typically to write. Your words are very kind. Peaches, Back at you! Thank you. Abigaile, Thank you so very much. Jennifer, I am glad you understood the message of this poem so well. Thank you. Anybody who knows my poetry is probably (almost) as surprised as me that this came from my pen. Thank you for your generous response. I am truly blessed. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well now..what's this??? Our funny guy Larry with a passionate romantic side?? I was waiting for the punch line here!! lol. Seriously, this is a beautiful, sensuous piece of poetry, and I love that last line And when I’m done you have etched my soul Beautiful. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, Yup, just tender hearted little old me. Lettin' that tiger out! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Larry, You make my heart pound! now did I see you say, tender hearted and now the tiger is being let out! I've known you long enough to know that the tiger has always been there! Just a little more tamed sometimes! I love this, it really is a great piece of work! Love ya Cindi |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow Larry!! A most sensual piece of writing you have given us filled with love and longing. This was simply beautiful!! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cindi, Aaaarrrgh! I am so happy you like this. Sue, Thanks, I know you do romantic poetry so well. Really appreciated your opinion. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I don't know another word. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
passing shadows, What a pleasant surprise! Thanks for reading and for your kind response.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic Larry...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, Well now, thank you for searching this out. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ I came 'archiving' ... looking for beauty ... and sure found it in this loveliest of pieces~  ... that's a huge SIGH !!*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
What a fun surprise Marge. Thank you. I had this illustrated with original artwork and printed and elegantly framed for a Christmas present to my wife weeks after this and it hangs in our bedroom. How kind of you. Grately appreciated for sure. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry!! I'm so glad that Marge brought this back up...I don't know how I could have missed it before, and so glad I didn't now. It is so sweetly tenderly provocative! I just love it...maybe I'll show it to my hubby so he can copy your ....er, plan? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, You made me blush! You are such a sweet lady. And thanks a ton. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
W O W ! !  |
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