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Miracle
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Miracle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Miracle I watch the night give way to light The stars in flight and clouds turn white And colors form in hues that fold That absolutely turns to gold. A miracle before my eyes A thing of wonder and surprise Bathed in crystals mystic mist That lingers in a mind that’s kissed. It makes me quiver makes me shake It rakes my soul to full awake. It stories fire into my heart Of glories shire and glories art I can’t believe each coming morn Or the miracle of the dawn I simply wonder in its share And live in awe of all that’s there. I dream upon the where and how And ask you please not wake me now. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
so in tiptoe I will out my form that took in this about of story that he tells so well while casting about his weave in spell |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I watch the night give way to light The stars in flight and clouds turn white And colors form in hues that fold That absolutely turns to gold. ==================================== Bathed in crystals mystic mist That lingers in a mind that’s kissed. ==================================== It stories fire into my heart Of glories shire and glories art I can’t believe each coming morn Or the miracle of the dawn I simply wonder in its share And live in awe of all that’s there. I dream upon the where and how And ask you please not wake me now. ========================================= This is classic Sy poetry... this is a perfect example of what made me(us all) fall for your work so long ago..... Your many gifts are showcased here.... the imagery that you paint with strokes of succinct, consise, subtley... the cadence and rhyme divine which is further impressive with the internal rhyme you lace thru.... the emotions that you convey with a poets heart and soul... and you tie all these gifts up in a bow made of strands of wisdom, wrapped up in those always profound closing couplets. Like I said...classic Sy poetry.... all thats left to say is................ (OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)  *winkiewinkie*  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. In the sunlight, in the shadows ... No ... I'll never stop looking for you. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-13-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STUNNING!!!!The perfect poem to start my day. *giggle* now I want to go back to bed and see such a vision as this. Absolutely wonderful.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* silly me forgot before  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 beautiful write shining with light... the light....of love wonderful Seymour On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ If there's one thing I've enjoyed this morning ... it's reading and re-reading this piece~ It is the perfect 'read aloud' piece~ Transforms the face into a delightful all-over smile~ You are a marvelous poet, my friend~ Thank you for being in my day~ *HUGS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, this is sooooooo beautiful, it made me want to dream right now! (smiles) I love dreams, and I believe miracles can happen as long as you listen to your heart sing! (sigh) BRAVO!!! Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, As long as you continue to shine I'll continue to grow. *L* JM, There is nothing sweeter than your praise. Love ya Sy Startime, Wonderful comment, thank you. *L* Gentle, Thank you for the wonderful. *L* Marge, You keep telling me these things and I'll start believing them. LOL Hugs and kisses. Mistletoe, Thank you for the bravo. *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow!!! I love it when Janet shouts out OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS. That means this is extra special and I completely trust her regard!!! Your miracle is marvelous and very enlightening!!! IABSOLUTELYAGREEWITHJANET!  Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"that lingers in a mind that's kissed" Enjoyed, Enjoyed, Enjoyed !!! (tip-toeing away so as not to wake him . . . ) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Tabin... I bow to you and yours. Back to the top you go. Peace! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Yes she is so lovable and so are you. *L* Krawdad, Thanks for the tip-toe and enjoy. Andrew, Thanks for the boost. |
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